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3The Proxy Ninja
[I got Nicole to ask him to sign my yearbook and he did! But my problem is he’s going to South.] *to the South (or just plain "South" without the "to").
Lmfao. Here's the dilemma. This is the first piece I've read off your site, and I haven't read enough to gauge what you wrote on purpose or what you didn't. But, I'm taking a lucky leap, here. Just by your witty little name alone.
I'm not sure if the switch for the consistent "cory/Cory" to "Corey" was on purpose or not. There's a few other things. I'm a real grammar Nazi unless I could evidently -tell- that a writer is doing it on purpose. And I haven't read enough of your work to make that kind of assessment.
All I know is that I was grinning through most of the things you wrote- in your witty way, you -perfectly- set up the kind of character that I -know- in real life, relying on guy after guy to sustain her meager little existence. And in that way, I love it. I love her simpleton language and her under-developed little mind. She really IS naive and kind of hilarious. Especially nearing the end. Actually, after the first entry, I was already smirking and chuckling. Probably because you've set up the most truthful characters I've ever seen. I seriously know someone almost -exactly like that-.
My only hope is that you weren't once that girl. Because then I could truly admire you for your creativity. Lmao. For anyone else, I might have written: "If I wanted to read your diary, I would have asked. What is this shit." Something to that effect which has done more harm than good.
But I like how witty it is without being too -stark- about its humor. I like that you're not spoon-feeding the writer and letting them know that they MUST FIND THIS FUNNY because it is ironic and truthful. I like how you let the reader assess fact from fiction.
I will read the rest of this and enjoy her progress ( I'm hoping she turns out into one of those real jaded, sophisticated little prisses by the end of this ) after I have read enough of your more serious work.
I found this quite funny, and am wondering why no one has read it, yet. It's hilarious!
3The Proxy Ninja[I got Nicole to ask him to sign my yearbook and he did! But my problem is he’s going to South.] *to the South (or just plain "South" without the "to").
Lmfao. Here's the dilemma. This is the first piece I've read off your site, and I haven't read enough to gauge what you wrote on purpose or what you didn't. But, I'm taking a lucky leap, here. Just by your witty little name alone.
I'm not sure if the switch for the consistent "cory/Cory" to "Corey" was on purpose or not. There's a few other things. I'm a real grammar Nazi unless I could evidently -tell- that a writer is doing it on purpose. And I haven't read enough of your work to make that kind of assessment.
All I know is that I was grinning through most of the things you wrote- in your witty way, you -perfectly- set up the kind of character that I -know- in real life, relying on guy after guy to sustain her meager little existence. And in that way, I love it. I love her simpleton language and her under-developed little mind. She really IS naive and kind of hilarious. Especially nearing the end. Actually, after the first entry, I was already smirking and chuckling. Probably because you've set up the most truthful characters I've ever seen. I seriously know someone almost -exactly like that-.
My only hope is that you weren't once that girl. Because then I could truly admire you for your creativity. Lmao. For anyone else, I might have written: "If I wanted to read your diary, I would have asked. What is this shit." Something to that effect which has done more harm than good.
But I like how witty it is without being too -stark- about its humor. I like that you're not spoon-feeding the writer and letting them know that they MUST FIND THIS FUNNY because it is ironic and truthful. I like how you let the reader assess fact from fiction.
I will read the rest of this and enjoy her progress ( I'm hoping she turns out into one of those real jaded, sophisticated little prisses by the end of this ) after I have read enough of your more serious work.
I found this quite funny, and am wondering why no one has read it, yet. It's hilarious!