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10/27/2005 c1 6Gilee7
This is haiku, right? I don't even know. I'm guessing it is, which makes the length okay. I hate those kinda poems, though, because they leave so much to be desired. I'd like to see a whole poem about this subject, rather than just three short lines. But, anyways, this was clever and I do respect it.
8/30/2005 c1 56Tessa Celest
I was never big on really short poems...Its a nice idea, but it seems like you cut it off too soon.
8/26/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
nice... short & awesome
8/22/2005 c1 Martin Peterson
Heh heh, very clever. Didn't get it at first, wondered if I was reading the same poem as the others who've commented. But on second reading... Cunning indeed!

8/22/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
good point.
8/22/2005 c1 80citrus scented
love it, theres such a darker, deeper underlying message to it. chilling, but the whole effect is quite sneaky and cunning maybe because of the title. good choice of words.
8/21/2005 c1 UJWF0WFW0FWE0WEF0
Most explicit haiku I've ever read. But yeah i like the message thingy too.
8/21/2005 c1 24Moonjava
Interesting I never really thought of it that way. But then this isn't exactly my kind of topic. But still really nice though. Kind of makes you wonder.
8/21/2005 c1 168SeaVoi
You know that sound like a good idea until you think of the horrible stench you’d create for your loved ones, don’t worry I’m just kidding. I really respect this poem. I guess I have never understood why a person might need a stone to say they were once a person and had a real life if you are important to some body you always be remembered. Nice poem, I really do like what you are saying. :)

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