for Leave8/22/2005 c1 
52godsandstars
hm to be honest, it's ohsototally cliché, and not my taste at all. i can't offer anything to make it better, because i don't write like this, but i suppose if you don't like it my oppionion is justified. XDD
52godsandstarshm to be honest, it's ohsototally cliché, and not my taste at all. i can't offer anything to make it better, because i don't write like this, but i suppose if you don't like it my oppionion is justified. XDD
8/22/2005 c1 13KwazyKandyPie
the message is simple, you want this person out of your life. simple poems are great. you don't have to think so much about the meaning. XD -kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
13KwazyKandyPiethe message is simple, you want this person out of your life. simple poems are great. you don't have to think so much about the meaning. XD -kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
8/21/2005 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
Actually I liked it. It was good... sort of sing-songish... reminded me of that chick jojos song a bit. Though It was a lot better than teeny bopper anguish... it was more real.
24Sarah-BrighteyesActually I liked it. It was good... sort of sing-songish... reminded me of that chick jojos song a bit. Though It was a lot better than teeny bopper anguish... it was more real.