for Pool of Oblivion11/25/2005 c1 
67Crazyest-of-Matt's
wow very nice symbolism like good job, it was a little short, and some of the rhymes seems a teensy bit stretched but other then that good job
*personal war was actually about my writing proses especially with poems thanks for you intrest*
67Crazyest-of-Matt'swow very nice symbolism like good job, it was a little short, and some of the rhymes seems a teensy bit stretched but other then that good job
*personal war was actually about my writing proses especially with poems thanks for you intrest*
8/21/2005 c1 26Bunnie09
Good imagry. I really like it. Please R&R my poetry. Thankiee! Sayonara! pyrofiregirl101
26Bunnie09Good imagry. I really like it. Please R&R my poetry. Thankiee! Sayonara! pyrofiregirl101
8/21/2005 c1 22rider on the storm
Deep. I liked it, and it rhymed, and I can't stand poems that don't rhyme (I'm weird). Good job!
R&R my poems?
22rider on the stormDeep. I liked it, and it rhymed, and I can't stand poems that don't rhyme (I'm weird). Good job!
R&R my poems?