for A Challenge5/7/2007 c2 
2Stang65
Yep, I like Vince. He just sounds so sweet and cute. Not that he would appreciate such words, but hey!
2Stang65Yep, I like Vince. He just sounds so sweet and cute. Not that he would appreciate such words, but hey!
11/14/2006 c11 1Imprisoned wit No Restrictions
wow! suspense, great story, i so wanna know whats gonna happen.
1Imprisoned wit No Restrictionswow! suspense, great story, i so wanna know whats gonna happen.
11/9/2006 c9 ConfusedLover
Question 1: Vince
Question 2: Yes
Question 3: Mario
Question 4: Audrey
Question 5: I dont have a fav, cuz its between Mario and Vince. I think Mario and Audrey should be together for awhile and things wont work out between them. Then Mario, sees,meet(whatever) Pamela and falls in love, she falls in love with him. The same with Vince and Audrey, Vince should date Pamela for awhile then the same happens to them as did Mario and Audrey. Many Problems, with that, cuz see Audrey would realize that shes in love with her best friend that dont know anything about her.
wow! it seems like i was just telling you how you shold write this story, but so far its really good, just givin some ideas though! have fun writing it!
Confused Lover
Question 1: Vince
Question 2: Yes
Question 3: Mario
Question 4: Audrey
Question 5: I dont have a fav, cuz its between Mario and Vince. I think Mario and Audrey should be together for awhile and things wont work out between them. Then Mario, sees,meet(whatever) Pamela and falls in love, she falls in love with him. The same with Vince and Audrey, Vince should date Pamela for awhile then the same happens to them as did Mario and Audrey. Many Problems, with that, cuz see Audrey would realize that shes in love with her best friend that dont know anything about her.
wow! it seems like i was just telling you how you shold write this story, but so far its really good, just givin some ideas though! have fun writing it!
Confused Lover
10/5/2006 c11 2hidden-rose
eh? wah! me want more! hehe lol... i can't wait! THE SUSPENSE! it's driving me nuts! hehe lol... please put another chappie up please please please? me's dying to know more! hehe... lol... i love it! I just found this today and i couldn't stop reading it... i kept going on and on and on until ... now me needs more! hehe i'm addicted! ... hehe don't even know how u spell it but yeah!
^_^ please put another chappie up soon... or sooner then soon! hehe lol
=p
2hidden-roseeh? wah! me want more! hehe lol... i can't wait! THE SUSPENSE! it's driving me nuts! hehe lol... please put another chappie up please please please? me's dying to know more! hehe... lol... i love it! I just found this today and i couldn't stop reading it... i kept going on and on and on until ... now me needs more! hehe i'm addicted! ... hehe don't even know how u spell it but yeah!
^_^ please put another chappie up soon... or sooner then soon! hehe lol
=p
7/20/2006 c11 TotalEclipseOfTheHeart2114
Ahh! How can you leave the story at that spot! YOU NEED TO CONTINUE THE STORY PLEASE!
Ahh! How can you leave the story at that spot! YOU NEED TO CONTINUE THE STORY PLEASE!
3/30/2006 c9 4unpredicable17
my favorite female character is Audrey and my favorite male character is Brad. Audrey should bewith Brad. Pamela should stop being a slut and try going out with Vince.
4unpredicable17my favorite female character is Audrey and my favorite male character is Brad. Audrey should bewith Brad. Pamela should stop being a slut and try going out with Vince.
3/12/2006 c11 17Unique1952
I hate being sick! I get behind in school, writing, and reviewing! Where's the rest? I need to know what happens next. lol, ok, just keep up the good work and update when you can.~*~Lil Dreamy Eyez~*~
17Unique1952I hate being sick! I get behind in school, writing, and reviewing! Where's the rest? I need to know what happens next. lol, ok, just keep up the good work and update when you can.~*~Lil Dreamy Eyez~*~
3/5/2006 c10 dark angel
i really love this story i like the way its builds up susspense but can be enoying but makes you want to read on i really want audrey to end up with brad i think she shud hav a fling with mario but not like having a long distant relaton ship just stay freinds with vince and vince should go out with a new character then maybe mario could go out with pamela and not cheat or anything . sorry by the way i just reall y thing about this story a lot so i have a lot to say about it
i really love this story i like the way its builds up susspense but can be enoying but makes you want to read on i really want audrey to end up with brad i think she shud hav a fling with mario but not like having a long distant relaton ship just stay freinds with vince and vince should go out with a new character then maybe mario could go out with pamela and not cheat or anything . sorry by the way i just reall y thing about this story a lot so i have a lot to say about it
2/19/2006 c11 ur just you
yes torture.. lol, not cool! anyways i really like thist story! so please update! please! its 2006 already! please :)
yes torture.. lol, not cool! anyways i really like thist story! so please update! please! its 2006 already! please :)