for A Little Bit of Everything1/14/2017 c1 Gaga for u
I love it so much funny and romantic
I love it so much funny and romantic
10/26/2015 c32 Guest
that was actually the worst thing i have ever read. Now looking forward to hw. :/
that was actually the worst thing i have ever read. Now looking forward to hw. :/
5/11/2014 c33 Lungi
Hey! Master of the Chimps :D just wanted to say that I ABSOLUTLY LOVE your stories, they are really good! They are very creative, and addictive :G
Hey! Master of the Chimps :D just wanted to say that I ABSOLUTLY LOVE your stories, they are really good! They are very creative, and addictive :G
9/6/2012 c2 Rachael
Hey! I copied your chapters into a word document awhile ago because I used to not have internet access very often. If you post an email that I can contact you at I'll send you what I have for this chapter. :)
Hey! I copied your chapters into a word document awhile ago because I used to not have internet access very often. If you post an email that I can contact you at I'll send you what I have for this chapter. :)
5/6/2012 c32 
1Ceri Anne
Aside from a few spelling and grammatical mistakes this was a really good story! I've noticed that you haven't finished the sequel so I'm not going to read it (plus in my head the stay together and live happily ever after when he gets home!) I just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this :)
1Ceri AnneAside from a few spelling and grammatical mistakes this was a really good story! I've noticed that you haven't finished the sequel so I'm not going to read it (plus in my head the stay together and live happily ever after when he gets home!) I just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this :)
7/7/2011 c33 leavemeialone
I really did enjoy this story. All the characters were so amazing. I love Kale for just about everything about herself. I like Fox for his perverted-ness and his way of relieving tension. Jordan is so cute and kind of innocent. I like how Warrick is and how he and her are so cute together. I was so sad seeing him leave but I was glad that you were still able to incorporate him back to the story. Thanks for writing this wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. Warrick sounds so freakin' awesome and hot. I have to admit that Raphael does piss me off sometimes. Her mom is so awesome for standing up to Jordan and always being there for her.
I really did enjoy this story. All the characters were so amazing. I love Kale for just about everything about herself. I like Fox for his perverted-ness and his way of relieving tension. Jordan is so cute and kind of innocent. I like how Warrick is and how he and her are so cute together. I was so sad seeing him leave but I was glad that you were still able to incorporate him back to the story. Thanks for writing this wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. Warrick sounds so freakin' awesome and hot. I have to admit that Raphael does piss me off sometimes. Her mom is so awesome for standing up to Jordan and always being there for her.
4/16/2011 c32 The Imagination Addict
OH! i forgot to write sth else! i think u should change ur sequel title slightly to "And A Huge Bit of Something". just a suggestion. the 'and' suggests continuation while the contrast between 'something' and 'everything' is complemented by 'little' vs 'huge'. i think it would make the title more interesting, cos ur current title is a wee bit too monotonous (too close to title of first book). lemme noe what u think!
OH! i forgot to write sth else! i think u should change ur sequel title slightly to "And A Huge Bit of Something". just a suggestion. the 'and' suggests continuation while the contrast between 'something' and 'everything' is complemented by 'little' vs 'huge'. i think it would make the title more interesting, cos ur current title is a wee bit too monotonous (too close to title of first book). lemme noe what u think!
4/16/2011 c33 The Imagination Addict
hey! i really enjoyed ur story! u mentioned in one of ur author notes that ur writing is a bit choppy n ur sorry abt that. that's kinda the only feedback-for-improvement i hv, n since u already know it, no need to dwell! i think it has more to do w ur random personality. especially at the start. when u started the story, i kept thinking "did i miss sth? why are we suddenly here in the story?" but towards the end, it was pretty damn near perfect. :) i just really want to praise ur characterisation! it's so amazing how real ur characters r! they're consistent in their personalities. i kept reading bcos i fell in love w ur characters from the start. i loved them so much the choppy writing didn't matter anymore. great job!
so anw, im gna go check out the sequel! so excited. i think anyone who said they wouldnt like warrick just cos he's going army... they're really ANNOYING! like hello, we cant love our characters' choices all the time! i myself hoped that he wouldn't. cos i was just imagining all of jordan's heartache! but then, im STILL gna read ur sequel, cos ur writing is just THAT good. :) n im really curious how ur charatcers' lives continue! heartache or not! YAY!
hey! i really enjoyed ur story! u mentioned in one of ur author notes that ur writing is a bit choppy n ur sorry abt that. that's kinda the only feedback-for-improvement i hv, n since u already know it, no need to dwell! i think it has more to do w ur random personality. especially at the start. when u started the story, i kept thinking "did i miss sth? why are we suddenly here in the story?" but towards the end, it was pretty damn near perfect. :) i just really want to praise ur characterisation! it's so amazing how real ur characters r! they're consistent in their personalities. i kept reading bcos i fell in love w ur characters from the start. i loved them so much the choppy writing didn't matter anymore. great job!
so anw, im gna go check out the sequel! so excited. i think anyone who said they wouldnt like warrick just cos he's going army... they're really ANNOYING! like hello, we cant love our characters' choices all the time! i myself hoped that he wouldn't. cos i was just imagining all of jordan's heartache! but then, im STILL gna read ur sequel, cos ur writing is just THAT good. :) n im really curious how ur charatcers' lives continue! heartache or not! YAY!