for Love9/14/2005 c1 angelasolis
I like this. You managed to capture so many feelings in a mere 6 lines. I love the last line.
Thanks for reviewing mine.
I like this. You managed to capture so many feelings in a mere 6 lines. I love the last line.
Thanks for reviewing mine.
8/31/2005 c1 
39SliversofSilverPain
oh, that's so cool, i don't know whether that fits my idea in its entirity, still cool, nice imagery
39SliversofSilverPainoh, that's so cool, i don't know whether that fits my idea in its entirity, still cool, nice imagery
8/30/2005 c1 33Twigstudios1972
Dazzling and spellbinding. I love the way you described it. Sensual yet complex. Well written Doray. Very well done.
33Twigstudios1972Dazzling and spellbinding. I love the way you described it. Sensual yet complex. Well written Doray. Very well done.
8/29/2005 c1 42Emmytastic gal
hi,
this is a really cool poem. i think you have very disinct style and i love your choice of words. good work :)
write on,Em
42Emmytastic galhi,
this is a really cool poem. i think you have very disinct style and i love your choice of words. good work :)
write on,Em
8/23/2005 c1 16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
Sounds like you captured the feeling of a single drop of romantic love right here. For some reason when I look and read this poem. It makes me think of a raindrop. Makes me think of those tiny specks of falling water when it rains. Each drop holding a minute significance that can influence the flow of life. This is what this poem makes me think. Though I don't know why?
16Theory Of The 4th DimensionSounds like you captured the feeling of a single drop of romantic love right here. For some reason when I look and read this poem. It makes me think of a raindrop. Makes me think of those tiny specks of falling water when it rains. Each drop holding a minute significance that can influence the flow of life. This is what this poem makes me think. Though I don't know why?