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2/5/2006 c1 5RedHairedWriter
"A mere slip of the tongue

In sweet honey dipped" I really like that bit. but in genral I like the second half, more. to me it makes more sence.Cool poem though. short and honey dipped :D
9/15/2005 c1 10mattrc
This is awesome! It gives me an idea of what you might mean, but doesn't just blurt it out and ruin the mystery of what every line actually meant. Another very well-written poem.
9/3/2005 c1 148Thyrt
awesomenessgreat job =)
8/27/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
interesting... I like it.. what's up with the line though?
8/26/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
Flows very well. 2nd half was my favorite. Keep it up.

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