8/24/2005 c1 24Shazinco
Lol, I love the second first haiku group. The idea of a series makes me happy, very interesting.
Lol, I love the second first haiku group. The idea of a series makes me happy, very interesting.
8/23/2005 c1 24Searching4Truth
Wow, that was excellent. Expressive and deep. I loved that. Lol, I feel bad for the butterflies, though. The last haiku really explained everything. Keep writing, you're really good! :-)
Wow, that was excellent. Expressive and deep. I loved that. Lol, I feel bad for the butterflies, though. The last haiku really explained everything. Keep writing, you're really good! :-)
8/23/2005 c1 177notated descant
well that was... unique. I see nothing wrong with butterfies, but you described what you think well. It was funny too (chemical warfare lmao!)
well that was... unique. I see nothing wrong with butterfies, but you described what you think well. It was funny too (chemical warfare lmao!)