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1/11/2006 c1 18Plinky
Wow, this was lovely. I loved it. Beautifully written, really gorgeous.

Lovely description of the secret. Keep writing!
9/7/2005 c1 hann
sad but good, you have a very nice way of writing things x x
9/3/2005 c1 148Thyrt
aw, the ending was really sweet 'our touch was enough' i liked that
9/2/2005 c1 38Artemises Linux
This is intresting, and I can relate to it, sort of. It's good n.n

~Linux
8/27/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
so sad... especially that last line
8/26/2005 c1 deletemyaccount2012
I like the picture you painted with the poem. Great job!
8/25/2005 c1 29Fuinixe
I like the second half much better than the first.

There should be more.
8/23/2005 c1 131forgotten-magick
very nice. i'd write more than that, but sometimes poems don't need a long review because a few words can say everything.
8/23/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

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