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8/24/2005 c1 169flaming.footprints
Ooh deep. It sent shivers down my spine ^.^ Going on Favourites.

~Shavo
8/24/2005 c1 133Dying Rose
This is beautiful. Dark and smooth all the way through until the last line; that was rather unexpected and sudden! Heh. The imagery is incredible and you are a very gifted writer!
8/24/2005 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
wow, powerful. full of feeling and emotion. i love it. it flows good too. well, good job and KW! and thanx for the nice review! write on forever and always!:D

~davida
8/24/2005 c1 5inferno tempest
really really good. keep it up.;)
8/24/2005 c1 141AllyCred
i like it...flows very well and speaks of so much emotion...well done...by the way, i love the last line, very poetic, loved it. lots of love ~AllyCred~
8/24/2005 c1 168SeaVoi
Well, that was interesting. I must say I had no idea that last line was coming. My eyes are bleeding, ahh!
8/24/2005 c1 11Cloud Burst
very stirring and powerful.. beautiful work!
8/23/2005 c1 81Isis ShadowWolf
This is beautiful and soulful. I love the imagry.

It reminds me of a kind of twisted fairy tale.
8/23/2005 c1 110KonekOniko
This was just...wow. It had a My Chemical Romance feel to it (ya kno, sorta gothic), yet it was original at the same time. I love this, it's so deliciously dark (you'd think I'm talking about chocolate -.-'') and it's simply amazing. Hope to see more from you soon!

~Sumi-chan; What you call love, I call pain.
8/23/2005 c1 41Suicidal Skies
"I am the needle of imperfectionWhich hangs on the bleeding cross of Jesus Christ...

You are my Romeo,The gun in my hand."

Love the lines, it's so angsty and bitter all in once.

Thanks for the review!)
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