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8/24/2005 c1 24Ebony Stars
I tried writing something like this, but ended up with a list of cliches. and so did you im afraid, apart from those last lines which I loved ^_^ Some lines were fantastic, but others have been repeated so much they have lost effect.
8/24/2005 c1 27Surfing Dog
Good advice:o) I like it...

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