for I'll See You There8/29/2005 c1 
73Rozlin
this was rather amusing to me... even though the mention of abuse should have dulled the humor a bit more, i think you need to make it angrier and possibly more violent... I do think this is good but me finding this humorous when i think it should be angrier makes me actually have to try not to offend by laughing which i'm pretty sure i already did... i'm sorry my twisted sence of humor gets me in trouble sometimes... -shrugs- i still think it was good...
73Rozlinthis was rather amusing to me... even though the mention of abuse should have dulled the humor a bit more, i think you need to make it angrier and possibly more violent... I do think this is good but me finding this humorous when i think it should be angrier makes me actually have to try not to offend by laughing which i'm pretty sure i already did... i'm sorry my twisted sence of humor gets me in trouble sometimes... -shrugs- i still think it was good...
8/25/2005 c1 13KwazyKandyPie
ouch. morbid. i like it. unique, well written, over all awesomeness.-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
13KwazyKandyPieouch. morbid. i like it. unique, well written, over all awesomeness.-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
8/25/2005 c1 4SerialXLain
Wow...This is so STRONG, and I love how you bolded the words to emphasize them. I love the kind of story line for this too. Great job. ^_^
-Lain-
4SerialXLainWow...This is so STRONG, and I love how you bolded the words to emphasize them. I love the kind of story line for this too. Great job. ^_^
-Lain-