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8/29/2005 c1 73Rozlin
this was rather amusing to me... even though the mention of abuse should have dulled the humor a bit more, i think you need to make it angrier and possibly more violent... I do think this is good but me finding this humorous when i think it should be angrier makes me actually have to try not to offend by laughing which i'm pretty sure i already did... i'm sorry my twisted sence of humor gets me in trouble sometimes... -shrugs- i still think it was good...
8/27/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
wow.. very creepy & powerful.. well written
8/26/2005 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
oh nicely put!
8/25/2005 c1 13KwazyKandyPie
ouch. morbid. i like it. unique, well written, over all awesomeness.-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
8/25/2005 c1 4SerialXLain
Wow...This is so STRONG, and I love how you bolded the words to emphasize them. I love the kind of story line for this too. Great job. ^_^

8/24/2005 c1 155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
Woah... So good. This poem rules! Great job, keep it up!
8/24/2005 c1 5Shinteki
o dark scary poem. We like! Ya well aside from that have you ever thought of making it a song? plz check out my poetry or story 2!

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