for Diary of a Confused 9th Grader6/16/2006 c6 
17Unique1952
Ok, to start off, I'm am so sorry for not reviewing lately but I have not forgot about this story and have now read all of the chapters! I love the story and I cant wait to read more. I'm sort of feeling sorry for Isis right now since she likes someone bu both males like Athena. Oh well again, great story and I cant wait to read more!
17Unique1952Ok, to start off, I'm am so sorry for not reviewing lately but I have not forgot about this story and have now read all of the chapters! I love the story and I cant wait to read more. I'm sort of feeling sorry for Isis right now since she likes someone bu both males like Athena. Oh well again, great story and I cant wait to read more!
12/25/2005 c5 1Fuji Syusuke
Nice reference to Family Guy. I'm pretty sure I have the shirt you're talking about, it's a good shirt. I'm a senior at my boarding school, so if you need any more help or information, you can contact me. My biggest suggestion is that if you continue writing each person's point of view, write their speaking/writing style different. That really seperates the characters and gives more personality to each of the characters. Your story is funny, keep writing.
1Fuji SyusukeNice reference to Family Guy. I'm pretty sure I have the shirt you're talking about, it's a good shirt. I'm a senior at my boarding school, so if you need any more help or information, you can contact me. My biggest suggestion is that if you continue writing each person's point of view, write their speaking/writing style different. That really seperates the characters and gives more personality to each of the characters. Your story is funny, keep writing.
12/23/2005 c2 Kythia
This story has tons of potential. I really like what I know about the characters. However, what I know is very little. Expound on their backgounds a bit.Things are happening to quickly with relationships. In real life, do people who have lasting relationship get into them that quickly? Generally speaking, they do not. Also, we very little about the characters, and already you are showing different point of views. It might get a little confusing.
I hope that this way a bit of help! Thanks for reading my story! I will continue to read this one...I kinda like it!
~Kythia
This story has tons of potential. I really like what I know about the characters. However, what I know is very little. Expound on their backgounds a bit.Things are happening to quickly with relationships. In real life, do people who have lasting relationship get into them that quickly? Generally speaking, they do not. Also, we very little about the characters, and already you are showing different point of views. It might get a little confusing.
I hope that this way a bit of help! Thanks for reading my story! I will continue to read this one...I kinda like it!
~Kythia
11/16/2005 c5 233kelsi bones
Hey chica, thanks for reviewing my story! I really like this, it's awesome. It's easy to relate with the characters, thats even more awesome. Just drop me an email if you need any help/ideas.
Mushrooms with pink bikiniS
233kelsi bonesHey chica, thanks for reviewing my story! I really like this, it's awesome. It's easy to relate with the characters, thats even more awesome. Just drop me an email if you need any help/ideas.
Mushrooms with pink bikiniS
9/15/2005 c3 Account 476567 Deleted
Well...a few things...one, it's well written and I like your style, but on the other hand it's just a tad unrealistsic...I mean have you ever been to a boarding school? I'm only asking because I'm currently a 9th grader at a boarding school, and I notice alot of day school aspects as apposed to boarding school aspects in your story; for example, there is no such thing as three to a dorm, and two, there is no way in hell that anyone has an entire floor to themselves. However, since this is a work of fiction, nothing says that you have to be accurate, but, if you want to write an accurate dipiction of boarding school life, I'd be more than happy to help you out. All and all, it's a good story, with a few inconsitantcies.
Well...a few things...one, it's well written and I like your style, but on the other hand it's just a tad unrealistsic...I mean have you ever been to a boarding school? I'm only asking because I'm currently a 9th grader at a boarding school, and I notice alot of day school aspects as apposed to boarding school aspects in your story; for example, there is no such thing as three to a dorm, and two, there is no way in hell that anyone has an entire floor to themselves. However, since this is a work of fiction, nothing says that you have to be accurate, but, if you want to write an accurate dipiction of boarding school life, I'd be more than happy to help you out. All and all, it's a good story, with a few inconsitantcies.
9/2/2005 c2 17Unique1952
Cool! Please dont stop writing this, I cant wait to see what will happen next. I would've reviewed sooner but 1, school started, and 2, everytime I started reading the first chapter, I got kicked off (it's sort of long.) Anyways, this is really good and I cant wait to read more!
17Unique1952Cool! Please dont stop writing this, I cant wait to see what will happen next. I would've reviewed sooner but 1, school started, and 2, everytime I started reading the first chapter, I got kicked off (it's sort of long.) Anyways, this is really good and I cant wait to read more!