for Over Me12/17/2005 c1 
1Ryena
I think it would be very good as a prologe. It's very...I can't even think of a word to describe how moving and just...perfect it sounds.
1RyenaI think it would be very good as a prologe. It's very...I can't even think of a word to describe how moving and just...perfect it sounds.
9/6/2005 c1 The-Account
I liked it. The detail was finely crafted and thougth out, while nto to excessive. Beautiful, to the point, and interesting, to say the least.
Keep writing like this and you could be published.
Loved it, right, Mr.Schoodles?
Good job!
I liked it. The detail was finely crafted and thougth out, while nto to excessive. Beautiful, to the point, and interesting, to say the least.
Keep writing like this and you could be published.
Loved it, right, Mr.Schoodles?
Good job!
8/28/2005 c1 Karen
ah.. -deep breath-that was so beautiful. if i could cry, i would.i love how the demons were described. i saw them so clearly in my mind's eye. and the smell of rotting flowers is something that never leaves you. i can smell it now.and jesus saved her. how sweet. i believe god, somewhat, abby. i just believe there is a higher power that will love me no matter what i do. as long as i still do nice things. i mean, some saying reading slash is going against god. and i don't think god would hate me or turn against me for something that makes me happy.this story is beautiful abby, and it warms my heart. i shall read it again and again.i love you!
ah.. -deep breath-that was so beautiful. if i could cry, i would.i love how the demons were described. i saw them so clearly in my mind's eye. and the smell of rotting flowers is something that never leaves you. i can smell it now.and jesus saved her. how sweet. i believe god, somewhat, abby. i just believe there is a higher power that will love me no matter what i do. as long as i still do nice things. i mean, some saying reading slash is going against god. and i don't think god would hate me or turn against me for something that makes me happy.this story is beautiful abby, and it warms my heart. i shall read it again and again.i love you!
8/26/2005 c1 6Sardonic Whispers
Ai ai ai! this gave me shivers. Your discription is so vivid. It's pretty similar, almost scarily so! Are you my twin sister?
6Sardonic WhispersAi ai ai! this gave me shivers. Your discription is so vivid. It's pretty similar, almost scarily so! Are you my twin sister?
8/24/2005 c1 StoryJunkie
awesome. awesome to the max. read one like this by sardonic whispers. Uncannily similar, you got to read it and be confirmed. awesome and eye popping it's called "Prophecy" your spine will tingle, its so like yours. what a wonderful awesome coincidence
awesome. awesome to the max. read one like this by sardonic whispers. Uncannily similar, you got to read it and be confirmed. awesome and eye popping it's called "Prophecy" your spine will tingle, its so like yours. what a wonderful awesome coincidence