for Lost Saturday9/1/2005 c1 twenty-second seduction
hm, nicely written, but you could've elaborated more. kudos.
(p.s you have a very long personal profile.)
hm, nicely written, but you could've elaborated more. kudos.
(p.s you have a very long personal profile.)
8/25/2005 c1 thecoughingman
no offense, but this seems so unlikely that I'd have a better chance of getting a hundred heads in a row with a coin toss. How does a man who earns a very sizable income not put one and one together and realize what was going to happen? Why didn't he tell the police when he recieved the call? And I'm pretty sure that he would've recognized his own car from the very beginning. Why is James Winthrop so...oblivious? He didn't get such a high pay for nothing, I'd bet.
no offense, but this seems so unlikely that I'd have a better chance of getting a hundred heads in a row with a coin toss. How does a man who earns a very sizable income not put one and one together and realize what was going to happen? Why didn't he tell the police when he recieved the call? And I'm pretty sure that he would've recognized his own car from the very beginning. Why is James Winthrop so...oblivious? He didn't get such a high pay for nothing, I'd bet.