for Sound of Loneliness10/11/2008 c1 
2vampyre-maiden
I really like this piece. It was was short and simple but really emotive and thought provoking at the same time. I love your writing style, awesome effort!
2vampyre-maidenI really like this piece. It was was short and simple but really emotive and thought provoking at the same time. I love your writing style, awesome effort!
4/29/2007 c1 9seventhchords
It's interesting, the way you expressed loneliness in this piece. I felt you brought the emotion here out really well - with a somewhat disturbing feel to it, albeit a very true interpretation, I must say. Good work.
9seventhchordsIt's interesting, the way you expressed loneliness in this piece. I felt you brought the emotion here out really well - with a somewhat disturbing feel to it, albeit a very true interpretation, I must say. Good work.
9/2/2005 c1 80The Magician Joseph
Ha, me likey, I like the ryhming pattern with a nice rythem, and the dark and cold feel it has.
Joseph
80The Magician JosephHa, me likey, I like the ryhming pattern with a nice rythem, and the dark and cold feel it has.
Joseph
8/25/2005 c1 Manju
woah, great details and imagery. i love the wording. "..sound of loneliness dripping from the soul?.." awesome. oh, by "jacket tight", do you mean the speaker is in an institution or something? lol, i was just wondering...
woah, great details and imagery. i love the wording. "..sound of loneliness dripping from the soul?.." awesome. oh, by "jacket tight", do you mean the speaker is in an institution or something? lol, i was just wondering...
8/25/2005 c1 7swtdreamz101
the feel of loneliness? not really, usually i'm trying to avoid like most pplz calls, haha c'mon ppl need their alone time :D but nice poem, yeah i like the whole dripping from the soul, good one
7swtdreamz101the feel of loneliness? not really, usually i'm trying to avoid like most pplz calls, haha c'mon ppl need their alone time :D but nice poem, yeah i like the whole dripping from the soul, good one