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for peace to his people

7/31/2009 c1 myturntobebrave
Wow. wow, wow, wow, this has left me speechless.

Amazing. Simply amazing, although the subject is so dark.
4/28/2008 c1 25rosary of ashes of dawn
wonderfull.

this story is enticing and grand.
11/2/2007 c1 1relapse into change
my god this is so fucking beautiful

i loved every word you used

wonderful poem :)

-fav
6/18/2006 c1 230lovelikeamixtape
"he is more the potential of a man that what a man is, and maybe this is what draws you to him, that he is a could be and not a definite. maybe he reminds you of you, what you could have been" your writing is brilliant- mysterious & beautiful, well-thought-out but natural.
4/8/2006 c1 2SinCorazon
This is so thought-provoking and eerie.

I'm Catholic, born into the religion. I take no offense, because it's true.

This was beautifully written, even though it's not written about something beautiful, just the opposite.
3/11/2006 c1 Eboniccinderella
I think this is a well-written poem on an issue that no one ever speaks about.You put into words what the Catholic church fails to put into voice.
2/4/2006 c1 the naked civil servant
oh god... an electric cord around your neck, heroin and orgasms, and no onw will ever love you...

gorgeous and heartbreaking. i may love you.
10/20/2005 c1 hey maria
This is absolutely gorgeous. Love love love "you take a shower with an electrical cord around your neck" and like an anorexic that just ate the chocolate cake sitting under her bed, empty alcohol bottles and porno flicks and blood" and I would quote the whole thing but that would just be lame of me.

Lovely, lovely.
10/13/2005 c1 23petsnail
you deserve so much more feedback than what you get. i chose the first piece up here because i couldnt decide one, and im too lame to review them all -you're amazing. i fucking love each.and.every.one of your words(the epitome of brilliant). youre inspiring and talented and i think that if you ever stop writing, the world will be missing a great deal of beauty. seriously, just. wow. im sorry i cant say more - but let it be known that, other than what random inspiration i can find, you and all great poets are what keep me writing. (no, i havent posted anything here. i probably never will.) and that means a LOT. continue. though seeing how much youve already got, stopping is out of the question. with as much love as there can be in a platonic-internet-fan-way.
9/9/2005 c1 addie pray
Holy Glory. I'm flabbergasted. Yes, flabbergasted. This is amazing.
9/8/2005 c1 hmmmmm
I love the way you intertwined religion and abuse. This whole thing held some kind of twisted poetic beauty. I'm left in shock.
9/7/2005 c1 79miss lavender
Oh, this was beautiful and so, very, very well written! I'm so proud for me to be on your favorites list, I don't think I'm even worthy of that; this is just so good! Everything. Description=Superb. Everything, was perfect.

Please continue on! I'll be watching!

-Miss Lav
9/7/2005 c1 68this is britt
hi Jess, I'm reviewing with a runny nose in homeroom. wow, that previous information was fascinating. now why didn't I review this sooner? I have no idea. reading it it comes off very short story like and I absolutely love your descriptions of the young boy. you are the most powerful and potent poet on this website.
9/1/2005 c1 77by His blood
this ... was absolutely excellent. i am left speechless. what can i say? no words can describe how much i loved this piece. amazing.
8/31/2005 c1 ReggieLove
that was awesome. i have no criticisms. this was just a character study? write more of them.
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