for Seven Deadly Sins9/27/2006 c1 
8You Make Me Smile A Lot
Wow, that must have taken a deep look into the dimensions of each sin. Oh, BTW, I watch Charmed too and I have seen that episode. Nice work. I have a habit of walking around calling for Leo. Back to the review. That was great. I'm sure that anyone who is deep into one of these sins (or all of them) can identify without any problem. Great work. p.s. I changed my name
8You Make Me Smile A LotWow, that must have taken a deep look into the dimensions of each sin. Oh, BTW, I watch Charmed too and I have seen that episode. Nice work. I have a habit of walking around calling for Leo. Back to the review. That was great. I'm sure that anyone who is deep into one of these sins (or all of them) can identify without any problem. Great work. p.s. I changed my name
9/22/2005 c1 Ahemait
i really liekd how you put in the colours at the end of each stanzaq, and the poem itself was very well written and original. great job. and i'm sorry i havent been reviewing any of your stuff lately!
i really liekd how you put in the colours at the end of each stanzaq, and the poem itself was very well written and original. great job. and i'm sorry i havent been reviewing any of your stuff lately!
9/5/2005 c1 emily
hey soz for not talking in ages my dad had a heart attack shall explain later. This poem isn't like your others. the rhyming scheme is unusual but very good in places. i like the message you are trying to get across keep it up!
hey soz for not talking in ages my dad had a heart attack shall explain later. This poem isn't like your others. the rhyming scheme is unusual but very good in places. i like the message you are trying to get across keep it up!
9/1/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow, i love the profound meaning and the style you used to define each 'sin'~~ wonderfully written!
keep writing~
132mizu no kokorowow, i love the profound meaning and the style you used to define each 'sin'~~ wonderfully written!
keep writing~
8/31/2005 c1 TheLimitoftime
Great poem love! The areas on hells revenge or justice are very well done and far out. Just don't let all this well deserved praise go to your head!
Great poem love! The areas on hells revenge or justice are very well done and far out. Just don't let all this well deserved praise go to your head!
8/30/2005 c1 298Moon-Chaser
I love this! Very well done, the research must have been fun as well. I love the information that you get at the same time as enjoying the reading.
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserI love this! Very well done, the research must have been fun as well. I love the information that you get at the same time as enjoying the reading.
Keep it up.
8/28/2005 c1 63lackluster
though i'm sure the idea(of the seven deadly sins) has been done and re-done you add your own unique twists to this and that makes it gorgeous. utterly fantastic.
63lacklusterthough i'm sure the idea(of the seven deadly sins) has been done and re-done you add your own unique twists to this and that makes it gorgeous. utterly fantastic.
8/26/2005 c1 39Alisha Marie
Wow..very well done...It was worth every hour...Great job...I really liked how you put this...Wish I could say more but I am speachless...
39Alisha MarieWow..very well done...It was worth every hour...Great job...I really liked how you put this...Wish I could say more but I am speachless...
8/26/2005 c1 73Rozlin
i like this, but i do think you could have done better on LUST... (rozlin is the personification of this sin and i think you could have depicted her better lol...) still, very good and intruiging... i like how on some of them you gave an explination for why they are committing this sin... and you descriptions are beautiful, as always... lots of love -Rozlin
73Rozlini like this, but i do think you could have done better on LUST... (rozlin is the personification of this sin and i think you could have depicted her better lol...) still, very good and intruiging... i like how on some of them you gave an explination for why they are committing this sin... and you descriptions are beautiful, as always... lots of love -Rozlin
8/26/2005 c1 Kyria Asimi
I like this very much, especially the fact that every sin had a description, punishment and color mentioned.
I like this very much, especially the fact that every sin had a description, punishment and color mentioned.
8/26/2005 c1 65dancingintherain
WOW- i love this so much! oh my, youve outdone yourself- each verse and each punishment uniquely thought of and the rhyming was perfectly subtle so it flowed-this is SO going on my fav.
Def. one of your best, yes yes!
lol, awesomely well written!
65dancingintherainWOW- i love this so much! oh my, youve outdone yourself- each verse and each punishment uniquely thought of and the rhyming was perfectly subtle so it flowed-this is SO going on my fav.
Def. one of your best, yes yes!
lol, awesomely well written!
8/26/2005 c1 190apromptedpoet
Heya babe!
Well I already told you what I thought of this one while we were talking about how stupid boys can be right? lol. But since I'm tired and I'm bored and you told me too (yes mommy!) I'll review it anyway!.
All your poems are amazing..(no phenomenal! you can't beat that can you? MNEH! lol) And I've told you this before!
It definately deserves more than a 10 but FP won't let me put a million zeros after that but you know what I mean! lol.
Anyway I absolutely love it and I'm sure everyone else will too!
Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
190apromptedpoetHeya babe!
Well I already told you what I thought of this one while we were talking about how stupid boys can be right? lol. But since I'm tired and I'm bored and you told me too (yes mommy!) I'll review it anyway!.
All your poems are amazing..(no phenomenal! you can't beat that can you? MNEH! lol) And I've told you this before!
It definately deserves more than a 10 but FP won't let me put a million zeros after that but you know what I mean! lol.
Anyway I absolutely love it and I'm sure everyone else will too!
Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
8/26/2005 c1 60Rosanna28
Hey babe! I know I already told you what I thought of this piece, but whatever! I'm just gonna tell you again! ^_^
I think you're getting better and better with every poem you write and I just love this one. I love the titel, I love the idea of the seven deadly sins, I love how you wrote it! I think it deserves a 10+, especially the lust, anger and envie parts! I absolutely loved it! Awesome job!
Much love, Rosanna.
60Rosanna28Hey babe! I know I already told you what I thought of this piece, but whatever! I'm just gonna tell you again! ^_^
I think you're getting better and better with every poem you write and I just love this one. I love the titel, I love the idea of the seven deadly sins, I love how you wrote it! I think it deserves a 10+, especially the lust, anger and envie parts! I absolutely loved it! Awesome job!
Much love, Rosanna.