for One Last Song9/11/2005 c12 
9WhitePerria
NO DON"T MARRY HIM! Why doesn't she just make her grandfather give him some money?
9WhitePerriaNO DON"T MARRY HIM! Why doesn't she just make her grandfather give him some money?
9/11/2005 c10 WhitePerria
Hmm.. what should I write... AWESOME story so far! I love it! and... I really really like that song.. - behind these hazel eyes.. LOL :)
Hmm.. what should I write... AWESOME story so far! I love it! and... I really really like that song.. - behind these hazel eyes.. LOL :)
9/11/2005 c7 WhitePerria
Wow... Devante would make his friend kidnap Gen for Dior to GO OUT with him?
Wow... Devante would make his friend kidnap Gen for Dior to GO OUT with him?
9/11/2005 c5 WhitePerria
awesome story... but it needs more editing.. stuff like "his heartbeat was racing"? isn't it supposed to be "his heart was racing"? lol anyways great story so far!
awesome story... but it needs more editing.. stuff like "his heartbeat was racing"? isn't it supposed to be "his heart was racing"? lol anyways great story so far!
9/11/2005 c3 WhitePerria
wow.. she kissed andre! just like that! hmm... awesome story so far... whoa Dior sure gets lots of admirers! and enjoys carrying out acts of violence to helplessly lovesick boys...
wow.. she kissed andre! just like that! hmm... awesome story so far... whoa Dior sure gets lots of admirers! and enjoys carrying out acts of violence to helplessly lovesick boys...
9/11/2005 c2 WhitePerria
wow... lots of carrying in this chapter! Dior REALLY sounds like you...I mean seriously...lets see where this is going... :)
wow... lots of carrying in this chapter! Dior REALLY sounds like you...I mean seriously...lets see where this is going... :)
9/10/2005 c18 suicide-girl
She dies? you fucking killed her? How could you do that? that is so stupid. She has to marry dome bastard to save the guy she loves and they don't even get to be together in the end?.
fucking stupid.
She dies? you fucking killed her? How could you do that? that is so stupid. She has to marry dome bastard to save the guy she loves and they don't even get to be together in the end?.
fucking stupid.
9/10/2005 c18 theeighthhouse
NO YOU ARE SO MEAN! you could have ended it with her in a hospital..and she was barely alive..but she was strong and she slowly healed..and then in another chappie they get married and live happily ever after..[yes i am such a sucker for that] =p but anyway..you should have made this romance/tragedy.
NO YOU ARE SO MEAN! you could have ended it with her in a hospital..and she was barely alive..but she was strong and she slowly healed..and then in another chappie they get married and live happily ever after..[yes i am such a sucker for that] =p but anyway..you should have made this romance/tragedy.
9/10/2005 c18 34Lost Dreamer of Hopes
IT'S SO SAD! *SOB* talk about being strong-willed! if it was me, i would've pretty much died...
34Lost Dreamer of HopesIT'S SO SAD! *SOB* talk about being strong-willed! if it was me, i would've pretty much died...