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9/11/2005 c12 9WhitePerria
NO DON"T MARRY HIM! Why doesn't she just make her grandfather give him some money?
9/11/2005 c11 WhitePerria
WOW... hope he doesn't die or anything...Devante, I mean
9/11/2005 c10 WhitePerria
Hmm.. what should I write... AWESOME story so far! I love it! and... I really really like that song.. - behind these hazel eyes.. LOL :)
9/11/2005 c9 WhitePerria
wow.. extreme truth-or-dareness..
9/11/2005 c8 WhitePerria
cool! way sweet! they're singing TOGETHER!
9/11/2005 c7 WhitePerria
Wow... Devante would make his friend kidnap Gen for Dior to GO OUT with him?
9/11/2005 c5 WhitePerria
awesome story... but it needs more editing.. stuff like "his heartbeat was racing"? isn't it supposed to be "his heart was racing"? lol anyways great story so far!
9/11/2005 c4 WhitePerria
whoa! Dior sure can drink... lol
9/11/2005 c3 WhitePerria
wow.. she kissed andre! just like that! hmm... awesome story so far... whoa Dior sure gets lots of admirers! and enjoys carrying out acts of violence to helplessly lovesick boys...
9/11/2005 c2 WhitePerria
wow... lots of carrying in this chapter! Dior REALLY sounds like you...I mean seriously...lets see where this is going... :)
9/11/2005 c1 WhitePerria
Cool beginning... all right... on to the next chapter...
9/10/2005 c18 suicide-girl
She dies? you fucking killed her? How could you do that? that is so stupid. She has to marry dome bastard to save the guy she loves and they don't even get to be together in the end?.

fucking stupid.
9/10/2005 c18 33PearlinTheMist
oh my God, I'm sitting here crying. What a story. You are AmAzInG!
9/10/2005 c18 theeighthhouse
NO YOU ARE SO MEAN! you could have ended it with her in a hospital..and she was barely alive..but she was strong and she slowly healed..and then in another chappie they get married and live happily ever after..[yes i am such a sucker for that] =p but anyway..you should have made this romance/tragedy.
9/10/2005 c18 34Lost Dreamer of Hopes
IT'S SO SAD! *SOB* talk about being strong-willed! if it was me, i would've pretty much died...
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