
1/3/2006 c1
50Katrina Gabrielle
o, love.. it..It's sad, beautiful, true... Great job. I love the way some things rhyhm, and each time it's subtle but recognisable. jsut beautiful!

o, love.. it..It's sad, beautiful, true... Great job. I love the way some things rhyhm, and each time it's subtle but recognisable. jsut beautiful!
9/9/2005 c1
2aflyingmachine
i really liked this poem ^^ it reminds me of a lot of people..i especially loved the line 'Just smoke it all up one last time'

i really liked this poem ^^ it reminds me of a lot of people..i especially loved the line 'Just smoke it all up one last time'
9/3/2005 c1
6Rubyme
Lovely poem my dear. Reminds me of some stuff in my past... you are talented writer.
Please write more. I was very saddened in seeing you only have one story posted. BUT YOUR BIO WAS INTERESTING! =)

Lovely poem my dear. Reminds me of some stuff in my past... you are talented writer.
Please write more. I was very saddened in seeing you only have one story posted. BUT YOUR BIO WAS INTERESTING! =)
8/26/2005 c1 finished
Wow, I don't exactly know why, but I really liked this piece. Nothing jumped out at me, I just loved it as a whole. Congratulations, a few more poems as good as this and you're gonna make it to my favourite authors list! :)
Wow, I don't exactly know why, but I really liked this piece. Nothing jumped out at me, I just loved it as a whole. Congratulations, a few more poems as good as this and you're gonna make it to my favourite authors list! :)