for One and Only11/14/2005 c1 Ife
JOY! very happy poem, love the 'But wait, i'm wrong, you're an angel' bit, it gives the poem a - not a naive feeling, just a blissful feeling. true love?
luv Ife
JOY! very happy poem, love the 'But wait, i'm wrong, you're an angel' bit, it gives the poem a - not a naive feeling, just a blissful feeling. true love?
luv Ife
8/27/2005 c1 
3Audwin
True love is a beautiful thing... And you need not to be perfect; for loving eyes, a loved one is perfect.
It came straight from the heart – I like and respect poems written this way. Excellent job. However, some things could be adjusted here and there for a better feel. Nonetheless, it's great.
Much luck in the future.
3AudwinTrue love is a beautiful thing... And you need not to be perfect; for loving eyes, a loved one is perfect.
It came straight from the heart – I like and respect poems written this way. Excellent job. However, some things could be adjusted here and there for a better feel. Nonetheless, it's great.
Much luck in the future.
8/27/2005 c1 Dan
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