for Crimson Eyes8/28/2005 c1 
55Lellida
I can't find the reference in this poem, but I still like it. You set the character up well by talking about how she is silent, and not real. The stanza about her eyes bleeding through your soul is amazing, and the last two lines sum up the poem without actually revealing anything more. Lovely.
55LellidaI can't find the reference in this poem, but I still like it. You set the character up well by talking about how she is silent, and not real. The stanza about her eyes bleeding through your soul is amazing, and the last two lines sum up the poem without actually revealing anything more. Lovely.
8/28/2005 c1 7swtdreamz101
this is kinda scary. sorry just crimson eyes...*burr* but the whole mystery thing's kinda kool. good job
7swtdreamz101this is kinda scary. sorry just crimson eyes...*burr* but the whole mystery thing's kinda kool. good job
8/27/2005 c1 20Pheobe Meryll
I liked your theme in this. Especially liked the second-to-last verse, "those eyes will bleed through your soul/and reside in your essence eternally." Very etheral and kind of morbid.
20Pheobe MeryllI liked your theme in this. Especially liked the second-to-last verse, "those eyes will bleed through your soul/and reside in your essence eternally." Very etheral and kind of morbid.