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8/27/2005 c1 76Cobster
This is quite a jam-packed poem. I love that it's ambiguous. It could be about someone on a small scale, someone you know (or once thought you knew). It could be about the central character in an epic story.

I love the metaphor about the ancient book, too...it's such an efficient and accurate comparison that it has to be the idea you based this poem around.

Good job on the structure, the composure...there aren't even any typos. I have no criticisms; this is flawless.
8/27/2005 c1 3R a y 0
I like it. Are you describing someone in particular?

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