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12/27/2006 c2 Red Rose
So these are all stand-alone pieces of stories then? Ah ok ^^

And yes, this person in this chapter seems rather sweet (and non-existent T_T) But I'll be darned, fiction is fiction, no? :P

I liked your language in the first ch. It was really gripping adn describing with the metaphores. Like the shoulder to lean on was spiked or something like that. Yeah, that was good.

Sorry I can't leave a better review :/ I feel sort of out of it today
8/30/2006 c1 TheAnonymousGod
This is full of angst and fury...and so it should come as no surprise to the reader that a number of your raging literary attacks stumble and falter.There's a few lines in here that really, really do nothing at all. You can't even make a literary paradox argument for them. They just waste your talent and my time.On the other hand, if you hadn't randomly decided to banish my kind to the outer darkness where the ability to be honest without fear of retribution wails and gnashes its teeth, I might say that you were a skilled writer. As it is, I rage against this tyranny, and demand an allowance for my people in your writings.
10/12/2005 c1 5Lana Storm-Born
its spelled banana. Joe?

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