for Adoration Against Music9/6/2005 c1 
60Lovejoy
A lovely comparison. You have a gift in your writing that allows real feeling to come through. Enjoyed this poem very much!
60LovejoyA lovely comparison. You have a gift in your writing that allows real feeling to come through. Enjoyed this poem very much!
9/1/2005 c1 laura wired words
This poem is so mysterious. The bolding of certain lines was really effective to the overall poem. A few lines such as '...black ink traces your melody...' worried me at first because I thought it might be one of those angst things. But it's really very beautiful.
In a way, your decision to hint at the subject without spelling it out is an essence of poetry.
Well done. (sorry it took me so long to review you. thanks for reviewing ensalada of trees)
This poem is so mysterious. The bolding of certain lines was really effective to the overall poem. A few lines such as '...black ink traces your melody...' worried me at first because I thought it might be one of those angst things. But it's really very beautiful.
In a way, your decision to hint at the subject without spelling it out is an essence of poetry.
Well done. (sorry it took me so long to review you. thanks for reviewing ensalada of trees)
8/29/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Deep, and well-detailed. I loved the intensity of this piece, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietDeep, and well-detailed. I loved the intensity of this piece, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.