for Mirror, Mirror
8/29/2005 c1 GypsyMothra
I love the repitition you used. Very nice. It flows great.
8/29/2005 c1 8Slowly Sinking
Powerful piece; the repetition is very effective (except 'see see the little child', it doesn't sound quite right to me; but that's probably just me being strange, lol.) Especially liked the openigng and the ending; great work!