for Seven Plus One8/30/2005 c1 
17Galleena
Wow.. deep man... Very well written though. It's like a personal experience although I won't ask if it is or not... Anyway it's well laid out and at the end we feel for the girl even though she doesn't have a name. We wat to yell at tht boyfriend 'IT WASN'T HER FAULT YOU MORON!' What was he like anyway, meeting his ex to get back at you. Gr! Men drive me crazy sometimes!
(ahem) Sorry about that, this is an intesting story but written as a one-shot I'd guess? It's a pity though because it's very good and makes you think. And now I'm waffling but still, stick with it,
galleena
17GalleenaWow.. deep man... Very well written though. It's like a personal experience although I won't ask if it is or not... Anyway it's well laid out and at the end we feel for the girl even though she doesn't have a name. We wat to yell at tht boyfriend 'IT WASN'T HER FAULT YOU MORON!' What was he like anyway, meeting his ex to get back at you. Gr! Men drive me crazy sometimes!
(ahem) Sorry about that, this is an intesting story but written as a one-shot I'd guess? It's a pity though because it's very good and makes you think. And now I'm waffling but still, stick with it,
galleena