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79Sorrowful Dreams
very good. a well written piece. I have to agree with this as well.
~Sorrow~
79Sorrowful Dreamsvery good. a well written piece. I have to agree with this as well.
~Sorrow~
10/2/2005 c1 136forbidden passion
I applaud your imagery. it amazes me how a poem with such few words can create such a vivid scene in my mind.
~Jessica AKA FP
136forbidden passionI applaud your imagery. it amazes me how a poem with such few words can create such a vivid scene in my mind.
~Jessica AKA FP
9/29/2005 c1 1Phillip Lombard
I really like your poem, I don't really know what poems are good or not... but ya, I think its good. Chack out my story on the holocaust!
1Phillip LombardI really like your poem, I don't really know what poems are good or not... but ya, I think its good. Chack out my story on the holocaust!
9/23/2005 c1 6relletyrots
I agree that trying to convert someone is horrible. I have a few friends that are christian, and one of them likes to go around saying that I and others are going to hell because we don't believe in "God."
This is a nice, short sweet piece, but, like many poems, it bears an immense meaning on its back. Good work.
6relletyrotsI agree that trying to convert someone is horrible. I have a few friends that are christian, and one of them likes to go around saying that I and others are going to hell because we don't believe in "God."
This is a nice, short sweet piece, but, like many poems, it bears an immense meaning on its back. Good work.
9/18/2005 c1 42Emmytastic gal
This is lovely. The words you choose are so incredible and make the whole composition so beautiful. You did an absolutely FABULOUS job.
write on,Emmy
42Emmytastic galThis is lovely. The words you choose are so incredible and make the whole composition so beautiful. You did an absolutely FABULOUS job.
write on,Emmy
9/16/2005 c1 2Mykell
This is incredibly powerful. At first, when I read the description, I thought you were trying to say those obnoxious people who ring on your doorbell are dangerous... But this made me think of cross burnings and, of course, the holocaust. If you kill somebody for their religion (or other minority status... or for being in the majority) you don't just hurt them and those close to them - their God(s)(ess)(esses) as well as members of their religion/race/etc get seriously pissed... You may have succeeded in hurting them, but you've made so many enemies...
2MykellThis is incredibly powerful. At first, when I read the description, I thought you were trying to say those obnoxious people who ring on your doorbell are dangerous... But this made me think of cross burnings and, of course, the holocaust. If you kill somebody for their religion (or other minority status... or for being in the majority) you don't just hurt them and those close to them - their God(s)(ess)(esses) as well as members of their religion/race/etc get seriously pissed... You may have succeeded in hurting them, but you've made so many enemies...
9/13/2005 c1 32Mackenzie Anderson
Interesting... you make a good point, and express it with such fluid grace.
32Mackenzie AndersonInteresting... you make a good point, and express it with such fluid grace.
9/11/2005 c1 183writerforever
Interesting poem. Well written. I don't believe in forcing someone to believe the way you do. But I do believe in sharing the love of Jesus Christ with everyone :)
183writerforeverInteresting poem. Well written. I don't believe in forcing someone to believe the way you do. But I do believe in sharing the love of Jesus Christ with everyone :)
9/11/2005 c1 156ShadowPharoh
very nicely-chosen words. a rare topic. once i have not read in a while. you did an excellent job on it.
SP
156ShadowPharohvery nicely-chosen words. a rare topic. once i have not read in a while. you did an excellent job on it.
SP
9/9/2005 c1 87youzi
very vivid imagery in this piece...seems kind of morbid but it got the point across. Do keep writing! =D
87youzivery vivid imagery in this piece...seems kind of morbid but it got the point across. Do keep writing! =D
9/8/2005 c1 94smile persephone
I think that is rape and I completely agree with Venustas iaceo. Anyway, the poem, it's beautiful and oh-so tragic. It speaks eloquently. The imagery is amazing as well.
94smile persephoneI think that is rape and I completely agree with Venustas iaceo. Anyway, the poem, it's beautiful and oh-so tragic. It speaks eloquently. The imagery is amazing as well.
9/7/2005 c1 Martin Peterson
Can't say I agree 100% with the message (though to some extent I do), though whether I agree or not is irrelevant. This is a good poem, some superb imagery which takes a bit of working out, but geat poetry takes a bit of thinking about.
Nicely done.
Matt
Can't say I agree 100% with the message (though to some extent I do), though whether I agree or not is irrelevant. This is a good poem, some superb imagery which takes a bit of working out, but geat poetry takes a bit of thinking about.
Nicely done.
Matt