for A cold day in Hades10/23/2010 c1 Persephone-know-it-all-1550
I dont know if you will ever read this but you should finish the story and I know that you dont want to but you just kinda left it hanging and no one likes a one chapter greek mythology story
I dont know if you will ever read this but you should finish the story and I know that you dont want to but you just kinda left it hanging and no one likes a one chapter greek mythology story
4/18/2010 c1 
23AvidWriter-92
Haha, this is great! I liked how you kept the each of the gods in character, even thought it was set in modern times. :) Fav!
23AvidWriter-92Haha, this is great! I liked how you kept the each of the gods in character, even thought it was set in modern times. :) Fav!
9/29/2009 c1 Hehe
Wow, I must be really out of it lately, the wasn't updated at all! The year is all wrong ... Man, am I spacey.
Wow, I must be really out of it lately, the wasn't updated at all! The year is all wrong ... Man, am I spacey.
9/26/2009 c1 Rabit Rabbit Beast
Mother fuck, I wrote a page long review and then my internet craps out and I lose everything! I'm not paying 20 bucks a month for this shit! Anywayz, ahem.
I came on hoping you had submitted the revised Devils Incarnate story, but instead I find this story has been recently updated, and I got copious amounts of amusement from it, so I suppose I won't scorn you too terribly for not putting up more pieces of your magnificent literature.
I don't recall the part about "Furies" joining the party, that must be a new addition to the story, or maybe I was too innocent at the time to put much thought into it, either way, I giggled like a school girl.
I cried, pooped and laughed at the part where Eros is trying to get Thanatos jeep out of the parking lot.
Then when Eros pulls up in Arie's car, I wasn't expecting that, it was very clever and funny, I love drunk thieves.
Also, when Than is on the phone with Lachesis it reminded me of you when you're talking with your mommy, it's adorable.
I really want to read more of this DUI in the waiting adventure.
P.S You don't know who this is!
P.S.S Have you noticed Thanatos is very clumsy, every time his cell goes off he drops whatever he's holding, it's kind of charming in a silly way. When he dropped his cigarette at the beginning of the story I thought of Cowboy bebop and how Jet looks so cool when he drops his cigarette to the ground then steps on it. Yes, I want more. now.
Mother fuck, I wrote a page long review and then my internet craps out and I lose everything! I'm not paying 20 bucks a month for this shit! Anywayz, ahem.
I came on hoping you had submitted the revised Devils Incarnate story, but instead I find this story has been recently updated, and I got copious amounts of amusement from it, so I suppose I won't scorn you too terribly for not putting up more pieces of your magnificent literature.
I don't recall the part about "Furies" joining the party, that must be a new addition to the story, or maybe I was too innocent at the time to put much thought into it, either way, I giggled like a school girl.
I cried, pooped and laughed at the part where Eros is trying to get Thanatos jeep out of the parking lot.
Then when Eros pulls up in Arie's car, I wasn't expecting that, it was very clever and funny, I love drunk thieves.
Also, when Than is on the phone with Lachesis it reminded me of you when you're talking with your mommy, it's adorable.
I really want to read more of this DUI in the waiting adventure.
P.S You don't know who this is!
P.S.S Have you noticed Thanatos is very clumsy, every time his cell goes off he drops whatever he's holding, it's kind of charming in a silly way. When he dropped his cigarette at the beginning of the story I thought of Cowboy bebop and how Jet looks so cool when he drops his cigarette to the ground then steps on it. Yes, I want more. now.
7/19/2009 c1 Cannot-Delete1
Heehee, I thought it was amusing. ;) Although, I have to ask, where is Hypnos? You put Thanatos in it without Hypnos? Anyway, it was a really good story.
Heehee, I thought it was amusing. ;) Although, I have to ask, where is Hypnos? You put Thanatos in it without Hypnos? Anyway, it was a really good story.
11/29/2005 c1 not here
u bloody bloody filthy...thing! put up more stories or i will carry home my j-rockers in your skull! *pant pant pant* j-rockers...m..god..
u bloody bloody filthy...thing! put up more stories or i will carry home my j-rockers in your skull! *pant pant pant* j-rockers...m..god..
9/8/2005 c1 Alice Fey
I'm not sure if I'm gonna go on with this...I guess it'll depend on my inspiration and how many ppl would actually care if I did post more. ^^
I'm not sure if I'm gonna go on with this...I guess it'll depend on my inspiration and how many ppl would actually care if I did post more. ^^
9/5/2005 c1 Vangrul
Are you going to continue or not? Its pretty good but just wondering if its a stand alone or goign to have another chapter.
Are you going to continue or not? Its pretty good but just wondering if its a stand alone or goign to have another chapter.
9/3/2005 c1 19Toxxic Hugs
LOL^^,luv the story.I always think of Hades being hot,so I absoulty luv his vanity:P.
19Toxxic HugsLOL^^,luv the story.I always think of Hades being hot,so I absoulty luv his vanity:P.
8/31/2005 c1 15Callipygian
Yes! Finally you put this lil baby up on fictionpress! god...good...one of the cutest little stories you've done...though i fear you will never add more to it...i guess i must apologize cuz i'm going to destroy you...
15CallipygianYes! Finally you put this lil baby up on fictionpress! god...good...one of the cutest little stories you've done...though i fear you will never add more to it...i guess i must apologize cuz i'm going to destroy you...
8/30/2005 c1 1Meg Schick
i really like this so far. It's really cute and the personalities work very well. Good job and update soon.
1Meg Schicki really like this so far. It's really cute and the personalities work very well. Good job and update soon.