
4/29/2021 c1 paulmolive222
I really love your story, it deserves a lot of audience. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NôvelStar, just submit your story to hardy nô or joye nô
I really love your story, it deserves a lot of audience. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NôvelStar, just submit your story to hardy nô or joye nô
9/6/2005 c1
612simpleplan13
The tension and emotion runs... run
i think it should be londer.. I funno that last lien doesnt seem like the to me

The tension and emotion runs... run
i think it should be londer.. I funno that last lien doesnt seem like the to me
9/2/2005 c1
13KwazyKandyPie
i really like the last line. good job on this one. ^_^-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-

i really like the last line. good job on this one. ^_^-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
9/1/2005 c1
59Lakoria
LOL This just takes me back to the West. *Sigh* Alas, it is no longer. Good job, short but to the point. Good job!
God bless, Lakoria

LOL This just takes me back to the West. *Sigh* Alas, it is no longer. Good job, short but to the point. Good job!
God bless, Lakoria
8/31/2005 c1 Just a reader
Very nice...I really liked the ending.
Very nice...I really liked the ending.