for Second Rate4/9/2006 c1 
9Sweet Songs of Surrender
this is so much like i feel some of the time, well done, i love it!
9Sweet Songs of Surrenderthis is so much like i feel some of the time, well done, i love it!
11/23/2005 c1 35Cool-Ruzz
I loved this. This would make a pretty song and a really pretty poem as well. I loved the lines,
'I feel so over looked,
So second rate.'
Nice. This was Bella! Keep on writing!
35Cool-RuzzI loved this. This would make a pretty song and a really pretty poem as well. I loved the lines,
'I feel so over looked,
So second rate.'
Nice. This was Bella! Keep on writing!
10/10/2005 c1 74TrinityFlower of Memories
Wow, That's how I feel whenever I didn't get somthing that I deserved or someone had beaten me at something. Thanks for the review! Great work!
74TrinityFlower of MemoriesWow, That's how I feel whenever I didn't get somthing that I deserved or someone had beaten me at something. Thanks for the review! Great work!
10/9/2005 c1 7jayk
This reminds me of the Internal Suffering song I made, same message but I think your song portrays it much clearer. Well done.
7jaykThis reminds me of the Internal Suffering song I made, same message but I think your song portrays it much clearer. Well done.
9/2/2005 c1 cassie
oh...everyone feels like that at some point in their life. i feel like it all the time, i look ahead and i worry i wont get as good marks as other ppl and stuff. or i will never acheive what they did. i look at you all the time and think: wow you are so good at everything, why cant i be like that.that was a really good song, i loved it. nice writng.
oh...everyone feels like that at some point in their life. i feel like it all the time, i look ahead and i worry i wont get as good marks as other ppl and stuff. or i will never acheive what they did. i look at you all the time and think: wow you are so good at everything, why cant i be like that.that was a really good song, i loved it. nice writng.