
12/22/2008 c1 personified mess
this was beautiful and descriptive.
it some how had a gloomy sort of feel,
but i liked it.
you have a knack for poetry.
this was beautiful and descriptive.
it some how had a gloomy sort of feel,
but i liked it.
you have a knack for poetry.
11/12/2005 c1
34Smoky Bear
nice work, very eloquent and beautifully structured.
ta for the review, the poem is just a bit of music trivia, and something that happened listening to pink floyd- i could explain in more depth but it would probably bore you

nice work, very eloquent and beautifully structured.
ta for the review, the poem is just a bit of music trivia, and something that happened listening to pink floyd- i could explain in more depth but it would probably bore you
9/2/2005 c1
16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
So sad and yet it makes me think of locked perseverence and determination. The real beauty lies in the existence of love amiss the darkness and pain. Thnx for sharing this!

So sad and yet it makes me think of locked perseverence and determination. The real beauty lies in the existence of love amiss the darkness and pain. Thnx for sharing this!
9/2/2005 c1
1k+Faithless Juliet
Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.

Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.