for Pheonix to Arise6/7/2006 c1 
34Nine-Black-Roses
this has got to be one of my favourite.its truly fantastic and i love the concepts you bring into this.i absolutley love the first stanza.and again the imagery is really gd in it all.keep up the gr8 work.x
34Nine-Black-Rosesthis has got to be one of my favourite.its truly fantastic and i love the concepts you bring into this.i absolutley love the first stanza.and again the imagery is really gd in it all.keep up the gr8 work.x
1/17/2006 c1 56from beneath the bell jar
This is such a cool poem. Some really creative lines as well. Love it.
56from beneath the bell jarThis is such a cool poem. Some really creative lines as well. Love it.
11/6/2005 c1 24Fireeye Howlsong Rainpelt
Good. Emotion-filled and I LOVE the flow. Great choice of words; I never would've thought of Phoenix to go with something like this, but it's great.
Keep writing, please, this is good. And thx for the review; sorry it took so long to review you back.
24Fireeye Howlsong RainpeltGood. Emotion-filled and I LOVE the flow. Great choice of words; I never would've thought of Phoenix to go with something like this, but it's great.
Keep writing, please, this is good. And thx for the review; sorry it took so long to review you back.
9/8/2005 c1 237classic violet
I loved the rhyming. I loved the words. I loved everything about this poem, it was so enchanting (I supposed that's the right word to use).
237classic violetI loved the rhyming. I loved the words. I loved everything about this poem, it was so enchanting (I supposed that's the right word to use).
9/7/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
Dancing like dust on a winters breeze... winter's
I like the repeated stanza and the first stanza is really cool too... powerful & very disturbing images
612simpleplan13Dancing like dust on a winters breeze... winter's
I like the repeated stanza and the first stanza is really cool too... powerful & very disturbing images
9/7/2005 c1 hann
ooh, i like that, very good. very powerful and lovely imagery
ooh, i like that, very good. very powerful and lovely imagery
9/5/2005 c1 136Anat Qetesh
wow, beautiful imagery, words, it was visible, great rythmn and flow.. just wow!
136Anat Qeteshwow, beautiful imagery, words, it was visible, great rythmn and flow.. just wow!
9/3/2005 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
Wow... that's so amazing... so sad... I like the image of the phoenix ariseing from the ashes of a burnt rose... you probly didn't write that, but my mind linked it; brilliant. beautiful poem... well written, very sad, but very very good.
39SliversofSilverPainWow... that's so amazing... so sad... I like the image of the phoenix ariseing from the ashes of a burnt rose... you probly didn't write that, but my mind linked it; brilliant. beautiful poem... well written, very sad, but very very good.