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6/7/2006 c1 34Nine-Black-Roses
this has got to be one of my favourite.its truly fantastic and i love the concepts you bring into this.i absolutley love the first stanza.and again the imagery is really gd in it all.keep up the gr8 work.x
5/23/2006 c1 829Anaare
Beautiful. I enjoyed reading this very much. Well done!
1/17/2006 c1 56from beneath the bell jar
This is such a cool poem. Some really creative lines as well. Love it.
11/6/2005 c1 24Fireeye Howlsong Rainpelt
Good. Emotion-filled and I LOVE the flow. Great choice of words; I never would've thought of Phoenix to go with something like this, but it's great.

Keep writing, please, this is good. And thx for the review; sorry it took so long to review you back.
9/28/2005 c1 deletemyaccount2012
Wow, that was beautiful.
9/8/2005 c1 237classic violet
I loved the rhyming. I loved the words. I loved everything about this poem, it was so enchanting (I supposed that's the right word to use).
9/7/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
Dancing like dust on a winters breeze... winter's

I like the repeated stanza and the first stanza is really cool too... powerful & very disturbing images
9/7/2005 c1 hann
ooh, i like that, very good. very powerful and lovely imagery
9/5/2005 c1 136Anat Qetesh
wow, beautiful imagery, words, it was visible, great rythmn and flow.. just wow!
9/3/2005 c1 148Thyrt
oh i love thatit was really goodgreat job
9/3/2005 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
Wow... that's so amazing... so sad... I like the image of the phoenix ariseing from the ashes of a burnt rose... you probly didn't write that, but my mind linked it; brilliant. beautiful poem... well written, very sad, but very very good.

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