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7/29/2021 c3 M
I don't know if you still read reviews, it's been 16 years since you first posted this after all, but this line: "What moon was this fellow orbiting?" is the best line I've read since Madame Bovary. It cracked me up so good.
7/19/2020 c13 6Polished Gem
Thanks for sharing this amazing piece of writing. You had me laughing so hard at several spots. You really should get this thing published. It would be a shame not too. Thanks from a fellow Canadian
-Polished Gem, Calgary
7/19/2020 c12 Polished Gem
Emesis is the medical term for any type of sputum or vomiting, but you don’t say anti emesis medication. You say antiemetic medication or simply antiemetics.
5/8/2020 c13 desireosiobe
Best story I've have read so far, even though I always Skip Janie talks but this story make my lockdown interesting, thank you very much...
8/31/2019 c13 Shailaputri
It is an story which makes me to read without taking break. But made me to think also. I expected something different in end. Like how Katrina was not much of bitch, and how much she loved her boyfriend, I kind of expected that she end up being with Rafe again. Somehow Janie seems to be kind of oscillating between two different decisions at that time after consoling Katrina. Her morale part wants Katrina to be with Rafe, but her own attraction towards Rafe beats it. That doesn't seem to be nice or good end in my eyes. Don't like the ending after reading the Katrina opening up to Janie. That kind of seems cruel. Suddenly Katrina got all the points in that scene.
8/19/2019 c10 AngelRiku
You have no idea what this story means to me. I adore this awesome nugget of Jane. I remember first reading this story years ago, but I love it so much that I come back to reread it time and time again along with Miss Haps’ “Girls, Boys, and Other Enigmas.” The young lady in this story is a lot like Jane; she is considered weird by her classmates but that doesn’t faze her. Oh and her boo is a looker as well, like Rafe. I see that you haven’t been active for a while and we readers understand that you have a life outside of writing. That incident involving some butthole stealing your story and publishing it probably didn’t help either, but I believe it was reported and the plagiarizer’s ‘story’ was removed from Amazon. I wish you the best of luck and if you ever write a story or two again, whether on FictionPress or another writing platform, I would love to read it. (But if you do plan on writing with another platform, please let us know on here so we can find you). Thank you again.
7/27/2019 c13 Guest
I just wanna say I first read this story like 5 years ago and I STILL come back to read it, if you ever publish, I would happily purchase! thanks for a great, original story
5/6/2019 c14 REGRETABLE
This was such a great story - I'm sorry to hear about your experience with that guy stealing your work. :(

With an entirely unique lead female, I was drawn in immediately and the character growth kept me hanging on. The jokes were funny and the relationship was adorable. I love that Janie was an entirely free spirit. I love that she saw Katrina as more than a two dimensional bad guy. It's such a cute story - and if you decide to publish - PLEASE add a chapter stating so!
1/4/2019 c1 LunaRed
I love how odd this story is
12/31/2018 c13 amazing
lucan fuck yea but raja all the way lol too adorbs! beautiful story you amazing author i hope ypu have so much more to read ahh
12/23/2018 c14 Angelina
What? Some guy plagiarized your story? What a nullshit water!
Don’t be discouraged, you are awesome!
12/20/2018 c4 Angelina
Helloooo!~
I just neeeded to comment on how AWESOME you and your stories are (especially this one! *girly squeal*).
Although I couldn’t comprehend almost half of the smartness, this story is hilarious and smoothly written.
I hope you keep on with writing. You are extremely talented!
7/30/2018 c13 Guest
This has got to be the craziest and most hilarious story out there! I loved your style of writing, the characters - like who can't love Jane and Rafe - the plot and pretty much each and every word. The science jokes and Jane's quirks made me smile and laugh like a lunatic. I wish there was an epilogue though. May that loser that had plagiarized go down. Thank you for keeping and sharing your story here :)
7/21/2018 c1 DaughterOfDarkness16
Omigod first chapter and I already LOVE the main character Jane is so extraordinarily awkward and funny that I couldn’t stop smiling while reading this! So excited for more!
7/12/2017 c1 Maria
I first read this in my early years of high school and absolutely loved it. Throughout the years I have re-read and fell in love again and again every time. Jane makes me laugh and smile so wide. This story brings me a lot joy. Thank you Deena :')
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