for Hiring a Hooligan8/23/2013 c13 ooglemac
glad you finished it! had a suckish day and this fixed it :) thank you for the awesome story
glad you finished it! had a suckish day and this fixed it :) thank you for the awesome story
8/23/2013 c14 Support
I just want you to know that I not only reviewed him, but also am in contact with amazon complaining. It's not right what he did.
I just want you to know that I not only reviewed him, but also am in contact with amazon complaining. It's not right what he did.
8/23/2013 c14 Statua
Sorry to hear about this :( I was excited to see the notification for your story in my inbox - I just finished re-reading hiring a hooligan yesterday I'll be sad to not be able to read it again. It's unfortunate there are such terribly unethical people in the world.
Sorry to hear about this :( I was excited to see the notification for your story in my inbox - I just finished re-reading hiring a hooligan yesterday I'll be sad to not be able to read it again. It's unfortunate there are such terribly unethical people in the world.
8/23/2013 c14 
7gulistala
Just wanted to say that I hope, as overused as it may sound, justice will be done. I emailed Amazon and requested more thorough plagiarism checks, if they do not have any in place, too. I hope all this will work out. Still shocked at the audacity of the guy, and I'm only a reader! Good luck in your future endeavours, whatever or wherever they may be.
7gulistalaJust wanted to say that I hope, as overused as it may sound, justice will be done. I emailed Amazon and requested more thorough plagiarism checks, if they do not have any in place, too. I hope all this will work out. Still shocked at the audacity of the guy, and I'm only a reader! Good luck in your future endeavours, whatever or wherever they may be.
8/23/2013 c14 Guest
Would YOU consider publishing your own work on amazon? I'm pretty sure I speak for many of your readers when I say that I would pay for the privilege of reading the continuing adventures of the Moretti family. ESPECIALLY if you ever end up finishing "Marrying the Vitch."
Please at least consider it?
Would YOU consider publishing your own work on amazon? I'm pretty sure I speak for many of your readers when I say that I would pay for the privilege of reading the continuing adventures of the Moretti family. ESPECIALLY if you ever end up finishing "Marrying the Vitch."
Please at least consider it?
8/23/2013 c14 turtledonkey27
I went to amazon and reviewed, and also lodged a complaint against the author. It makes me sick how people try to profit on other people's hard work. this was a really well-written story that you were generous enough to share with all of us, and now something like this happens. I'm pissed for you and hope this works out. I'll be sorry to see you go if you follow through with removing your stuff, but I can see why you would want/need to.
I went to amazon and reviewed, and also lodged a complaint against the author. It makes me sick how people try to profit on other people's hard work. this was a really well-written story that you were generous enough to share with all of us, and now something like this happens. I'm pissed for you and hope this works out. I'll be sorry to see you go if you follow through with removing your stuff, but I can see why you would want/need to.
8/23/2013 c14 A.Collins
Wow, I can't believe this guy. Didn't even have the brains to change the title and description to make finding it more difficult.
Now excuse me while I go flame this cumdumpster.
Wow, I can't believe this guy. Didn't even have the brains to change the title and description to make finding it more difficult.
Now excuse me while I go flame this cumdumpster.
8/23/2013 c14 Angelica Mendoza
This has been one of my favorite stories since I first made a fictionpress account! I am so PISSED that someone would do this to you! I'm going to take my righteous fury to amazon and make that mofo pay.
This has been one of my favorite stories since I first made a fictionpress account! I am so PISSED that someone would do this to you! I'm going to take my righteous fury to amazon and make that mofo pay.
8/20/2013 c13 Someone kind
I don't know if you read your reviews anymore, but I just wanted to know that someone plagiarized your story and published as their own on under the name of Andrew Pratt same title as yours and same summary. Hopefully you can get it taken down or your readers that read this story can report it to amazon, because you've put your hard work into writing this fabulous story and for someone to go and take it and publish it as their own is disgusting.
I don't know if you read your reviews anymore, but I just wanted to know that someone plagiarized your story and published as their own on under the name of Andrew Pratt same title as yours and same summary. Hopefully you can get it taken down or your readers that read this story can report it to amazon, because you've put your hard work into writing this fabulous story and for someone to go and take it and publish it as their own is disgusting.
8/10/2013 c1 4Lolitroy
Wat. Jane is so adorable! It's the first chapter and I already love her haha -w-' she just seems so... nice. I'd like to have her as a friend in real life ;)
As for constructive criticism... meh, you've got more than enough -w-' and I honestly didn't find anything particularly wrong. So congrats! I'm already hooked onto this :3
4LolitroyWat. Jane is so adorable! It's the first chapter and I already love her haha -w-' she just seems so... nice. I'd like to have her as a friend in real life ;)
As for constructive criticism... meh, you've got more than enough -w-' and I honestly didn't find anything particularly wrong. So congrats! I'm already hooked onto this :3
8/7/2013 c13 Just a stranger
God, I loved this so much. Even thought I didn't understand what Jane was saying half of the time, I fell in love with her character anyway. You're the only person who can get away with writing about a character as crazy as Jane. All the other fics I've read are absolute embarrassments.
God, I loved this so much. Even thought I didn't understand what Jane was saying half of the time, I fell in love with her character anyway. You're the only person who can get away with writing about a character as crazy as Jane. All the other fics I've read are absolute embarrassments.
7/31/2013 c13 The Broken Idealist
Well holy shit. I absolutely loved this.
First off, I'm so glad to find a heroine that I genuinely liked; reason being that she's a genuinely likable character. Jane's so believable, intelligent, and insane and I love her to bits. And everyone around her is crazy. Her grandmother is crazy.
I can die happy. Thank you.
Well holy shit. I absolutely loved this.
First off, I'm so glad to find a heroine that I genuinely liked; reason being that she's a genuinely likable character. Jane's so believable, intelligent, and insane and I love her to bits. And everyone around her is crazy. Her grandmother is crazy.
I can die happy. Thank you.
7/31/2013 c1 The Broken Idealist
I swear to God that I have never said this about any original story before but...
I fucking love your main character. Jesus Christ, hilariously ingenious first person narrative and all. And it's only the first chapter. I never review the first chapter.
I already know this is going to be brilliant.
I swear to God that I have never said this about any original story before but...
I fucking love your main character. Jesus Christ, hilariously ingenious first person narrative and all. And it's only the first chapter. I never review the first chapter.
I already know this is going to be brilliant.
6/26/2013 c13 2Lauren Stargazer
I am so glad that I read this story! I was laughing out loud multiple occasions and was reading with a big smile on my face pretty much the entire time. Janie, Rafe, Suril, Lucan, and Grandma were all wonderful characters in their own ways, so great job with that.
As for the technical talk, the math and science things Janie was constantly using, I found it to be one of the best parts about this story. If a law or equation looked even slightly familiar I'd feel kinda proud of myself, and when I knew exactly what Janie was talking about I was definitely proud of myself. Yay for my own (but less extreme) love of math and science!
One small thing I noticed though was that at one point you mentioned the temperature of the sun to be 15.7 million degrees K. You shouldn't say "degrees K" because kelvins are not measured in degrees. It should be 15.7 million kelvin.
Well, I don't have much more to say. Great job with this story. I loved it!
2Lauren StargazerI am so glad that I read this story! I was laughing out loud multiple occasions and was reading with a big smile on my face pretty much the entire time. Janie, Rafe, Suril, Lucan, and Grandma were all wonderful characters in their own ways, so great job with that.
As for the technical talk, the math and science things Janie was constantly using, I found it to be one of the best parts about this story. If a law or equation looked even slightly familiar I'd feel kinda proud of myself, and when I knew exactly what Janie was talking about I was definitely proud of myself. Yay for my own (but less extreme) love of math and science!
One small thing I noticed though was that at one point you mentioned the temperature of the sun to be 15.7 million degrees K. You shouldn't say "degrees K" because kelvins are not measured in degrees. It should be 15.7 million kelvin.
Well, I don't have much more to say. Great job with this story. I loved it!
6/22/2013 c13 2VannaM
I love this chapter! Jane is wonderfully eccentric, I love Rafe (in fact, I want one of my own (;), and I adore them together. I also love Grandma, and Suril, and even Bianca! I love all your characters, especially Rafe! You're incredibly talented and you took a great plot and created an amazing story!
2VannaMI love this chapter! Jane is wonderfully eccentric, I love Rafe (in fact, I want one of my own (;), and I adore them together. I also love Grandma, and Suril, and even Bianca! I love all your characters, especially Rafe! You're incredibly talented and you took a great plot and created an amazing story!