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11/24/2012 c13 Kzlily
I just found this story yesterday. It's absolutely hilarious! You have so much talent! I laughed all through your story but one of my favorite parts was when I got to chapter 4 and was reading the dinner scene. When Jane had to say grace, I laughed so hard I cried! I had to re-read that paragraph 3 times to be able to make it through! The way you told the story from her point of view really allows the reader to get into her head and see the world from her perspective which really made this story! Interspersing her thoughts with bits of dialog from the other characters nicely contrasts with and really adds to the story. I thought it was so funny that he picked up on her "oral fetish" and really seemed to like that. Add that to her 69 t-shirt and I'm sure his imagination had loads of fun with that!
I hope that your life is going well as a nurse. I'm a cardiac nurse and particularly loved those references! Thank you for this awesome story!
11/5/2012 c4 2Beautifully Corrupted
This is fuck freaking tastic I have not been able to stop laughing the entire time I read this! I love LOVE this story and I think you are an amazing linear equation!
10/29/2012 c13 4F.H.W
This is the shit man. Awesome work. Damn funny and interesting storyline. This is really one in a ten to hundred;)

Loved the characters and plot. So cool!:)
10/28/2012 c1 Kattya
OMG you are a genius! I think this story has made me laugh more times than I've ever can remember! Thanks for this, it's so awesome:)
10/19/2012 c12 heal me forever
oh forgot to tell u i am INDIAN ..may be u r even ?
10/19/2012 c13 heal me forever
god reading dis made me think dat even i know things of wat happing in skool as in studies lol u literally brought evrything of studies dude i LOVE RAFE ..lucas was ok lol still like him as abro to her ..anyway bang on stry love it :)
9/27/2012 c13 missyb1988
:) I giggled and swooned throughout this I really enjoyed it you are a truly good writer and smart as hell cos I didn't understand half of it but it was still brill
8/29/2012 c1 Mem Oak
BEST STORY EEEVEEEEERRRR! I wanna make a movie out of it!
8/29/2012 c5 114582
this is my favoritest story i've ever found on the internet (and maybe eve irl !)
i love the characters and jane makes me want to learn all that sciencey bullshit just to keep up with her!
she makes me want tO LEARN! I THINK I'M iN LOVE!
i laugh and i aww and you are lovely and brilliant and so is this story!
iF JANE DOESN'T END UP W/ LUCAN I'M GOING TO CRY & WRITE FANFICS IN MY HEAD IN WHICH SHE DOES
8/25/2012 c13 1xXxkikiomexXx
At first I was skeptical about reading this because I don't usually read things based on real life kind of things, but I saw 2k people liking and reviewing this so I was like what the hell after the first two chapters I was just reading through it constantly wanting to see what happens next. I would start on my computer then went to my iPod at night to res this story. Sadly half of the time I would skip any part that had to do with science things and math things even though I am really good at those I didn't even understand them. I couldn't believe how dense Janie was when it came to simple things like feelings but thats what gave it suspense. I love this story.
P. S. I am from america and was surprised when I was able to read the Celsius degrees and know exactly what it was talking about I feel so proud
8/19/2012 c6 ClosetReader
I keep rereading this story and it still makes me laugh!
8/18/2012 c13 twibbit
;))
8/18/2012 c13 Eire Girl
I liked this story for its original twist on the age old boy meet girl plot. On the whole it had me in bits with its one liners and off the wall characters. As someone who lived in Leicester for ten years the Melton Road ref was hillarious.
8/6/2012 c13 1Auriolus
I loved this story! I read it all in one day. It's one of the best I've ever read, and that's saying something (: Jane's so cute! And Rafe sounds so hot. Even his name sounds hot ;D Jane's so lucky.

Enough with my gushing. The story was great, the characterization was amazing, and the characters were really funny. I'm so sad that the story's over :(

Write more and keep up the good work!

-Auriolus
8/3/2012 c13 6weasleyjumper
Oh lordy. Im in love with two more fictional characters! Rafe and ... I've forgotten his name! What the fuck? He was my favourite, the gay one! So cute and funny and just plain awesome. Admittedly, as I am (my friends words not mine ) a dumbass bimbo...I didn't understand half of it, but I still adored it. You need to get this published!
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