
9/9/2005 c2 dksfj
Is poutine a Canadian thing? french fries covered in gravy sauce canNOT be got for you! Great chapter btw!
Is poutine a Canadian thing? french fries covered in gravy sauce canNOT be got for you! Great chapter btw!
9/9/2005 c1
47strawberry-toast
i'll admit i may just be in a weird mood but this is friggen awesome. it's funny, but serious. that's hard to pull off, but you do it. props. also i like the story cause it's romance and that's always fun, when it's unusual, and well, i'd want someone to get the crap beaten out of anyone who beat the crap out of me for being queer.

i'll admit i may just be in a weird mood but this is friggen awesome. it's funny, but serious. that's hard to pull off, but you do it. props. also i like the story cause it's romance and that's always fun, when it's unusual, and well, i'd want someone to get the crap beaten out of anyone who beat the crap out of me for being queer.
9/7/2005 c1 vociferous
oh man! this is absolutely hislarious! i really luv it! such a contrast from the gravedigger's daughter. A good contrast though! update soon pls!
oh man! this is absolutely hislarious! i really luv it! such a contrast from the gravedigger's daughter. A good contrast though! update soon pls!
9/6/2005 c1 CatH
Hahahaha! Just the right story to start my boring day! I've always liked your sense of humor way back in ff.net, and although I have been waiting eagerly for your other story update (this is NOT a subtle hint, no sirree, this is not a hint at all!) I find that your starting this new one is just hilarious. I can see the multiple scenarios playing out with these 2 characters. Ah, a swing from the angsty one to this creepy one.
Hahahaha! Just the right story to start my boring day! I've always liked your sense of humor way back in ff.net, and although I have been waiting eagerly for your other story update (this is NOT a subtle hint, no sirree, this is not a hint at all!) I find that your starting this new one is just hilarious. I can see the multiple scenarios playing out with these 2 characters. Ah, a swing from the angsty one to this creepy one.
9/6/2005 c1
5alleluia
This is a really awesome story so far. The story line is really interesting and I love the way Jane talks. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon.

This is a really awesome story so far. The story line is really interesting and I love the way Jane talks. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon.
9/6/2005 c1
8silent-distress
Hmm... a story to keep in mind about. You're really good with words, continue writing!

Hmm... a story to keep in mind about. You're really good with words, continue writing!
9/6/2005 c1
18flying blind
LOL!
love the story, little out there but an awesome story all the same, i hope you update soon can't wait to see what happens next

LOL!
love the story, little out there but an awesome story all the same, i hope you update soon can't wait to see what happens next
9/5/2005 c1
3J. Marit
this girl is crazy, lol.
this is a great story, i cant wait to read more...
write more soon please!
kellie

this girl is crazy, lol.
this is a great story, i cant wait to read more...
write more soon please!
kellie
9/4/2005 c1 Faye-san
Yes! I love it! Hahah give in to temptation...that's like that lol :p
Yes! I love it! Hahah give in to temptation...that's like that lol :p
9/4/2005 c1 wawawi
Wow you rock! Best first chapter ever! please please please continue it :)
Wow you rock! Best first chapter ever! please please please continue it :)