for Hiring a Hooligan9/3/2005 c1 Lainex
... You really like to start stories and keep me waiting for more, don't you? *cries* I squee, and I bemoan my fate to be your fanfic/ori-fic fan who dies repeatedly in happiness when you update. And I am so loving this one so far XD
... You really like to start stories and keep me waiting for more, don't you? *cries* I squee, and I bemoan my fate to be your fanfic/ori-fic fan who dies repeatedly in happiness when you update. And I am so loving this one so far XD
9/3/2005 c1 
1Erin Maureen
surprisingly funny ending, adn all around good humor in the chapter, i like jane, shes...interesting, yep i like her. and rafe, i hope you update soon so we can find out more...erm...so rafe can elaberate more on what he means by ...wanting her instead of money and the terms of...the deal...and stuff with him beating up somebody for her...ya...confusing?..eh sry. anyway basically all thats needed to be said is awesome chapter, i really really hope you update for your next chapter soon. please. PLEASE!
1Erin Maureensurprisingly funny ending, adn all around good humor in the chapter, i like jane, shes...interesting, yep i like her. and rafe, i hope you update soon so we can find out more...erm...so rafe can elaberate more on what he means by ...wanting her instead of money and the terms of...the deal...and stuff with him beating up somebody for her...ya...confusing?..eh sry. anyway basically all thats needed to be said is awesome chapter, i really really hope you update for your next chapter soon. please. PLEASE!
9/3/2005 c1 2Destiny Violet
hey! GREAT JOB for this first chapter, you should post some pics of Rafe cuz he sounds uber cute. and one of Jane of course. Awesome start, can't wait to read more, I especially LOVED the last part ^^
2Destiny Violethey! GREAT JOB for this first chapter, you should post some pics of Rafe cuz he sounds uber cute. and one of Jane of course. Awesome start, can't wait to read more, I especially LOVED the last part ^^