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7/11/2017 c3 Anghelsalupah
Funny as hell!Rafe and jane is an odd pair, but totally cute. I love this story very much.
7/5/2017 c7 FrlBarth
Hey Deena,

although I don't think a person like your science weirdo Jane who blabbers and rambles all those formulas and scientific laws everytime she gets nervous and/or embarrassed and at the same time can be THAT dense when it comes to boys at the age of 17 is anything close to realistic I still totally love her and your story! :-) so much fun to read. I'd call it a perfect modern fairy tale! :-)
7/3/2017 c14 nobidreams
I have read many different authors over the years and I rarerly review. But after reading your work, it would be a travesty (as so many others have acknowledged) to not comment on the absolute brilliance of this story. In fact, I would love to see this romance hit the movie screen. The character development is so out of this world that you were able to take such a cliched plot and enrich it with a very real and human relationships. I really hope you are pursuing publishing, because I would buy your work in a heartbeat.
5/1/2017 c13 Mrs. Awesomesauceness
Love it!
2/6/2017 c1 GinzzzRoxxx
Man alive! I searched up this book years ago when I was but a teenager and still adore it as my 26 year old self now! Never fails to put a smile on my face when I'm feeling particularly in need of one, so I can't thank you enough for that. If you have done any other writings elsewhere do let me know, I would so love to check it out.

Thanks again.

12/15/2016 c1 Bahati
Lmao I'm dying laughing. I can't believe I just found this story today, it's amazing
10/27/2016 c7 Laurie
Hi, I love the story so far. And I dont know if you're still active or what, but in the last few paragraphs when Jane describes her face heating up, it should be exothermic instead of endothermic. Otherwise, wonderful style and I can't wait to finish the story.
8/18/2016 c1 Brittney
What the heck did I just read?
7/18/2016 c13 queen-in-shining-armour
I absolutely loved this! And so does the friend I shared it with she thinks it's hilarious! I also have no idea what Jane is talking about for the most part as I am a lit nerd no science-y stuff for me. But I did understand a few, so that's cool. Rafe is absolutely adorable and hot and sexy and amazing and I love him as much as I love an old torn book. Which is a lot. Lucky Janie. I do feel sorry for Katrina, but maybe it'll be good for her in the long run. Also Jane's Grandma is awesomesauce! And Suril is awesome too! Janie's really cool as well, it's great that she doesn't care about others opinions and that she concentrates on her studies. And she is super cute and funny too. YAY! And Lucan is another brilliant character! Well, they all are really... They're all fabcellent! (especially Rafe) :3 hehe thank you!
4/14/2016 c13 14biddle29
I absolutely loved this story! Janie was an absolutely amazing and unique character and I have to say, one of my all time favorite characters to-date :) This was phenomenally written and absolute pleasure to read! Thank you so much for posting this! I loved it so much! Words can't describe how awesome it was!
11/11/2015 c13 Gaaras Beloved
This is the best story I have read ever. I started last night and was up until 5 reading. I even snuck away at work to read for a couple minutes. You are amazing, I am in so much love with this story.
10/19/2015 c14 rinievermilion
You know i did read this fanfiction i think about a year ago (only the first and last chapter because i did not understand what shit you are writing). Now I'm in second year high school and in science stream so i at least understand a 1/4 of what you are saying! Isn't that awesome.

You know this fanfiction makes my thermo receptors tranduce internal(heat) energy into receptor (generator) potentials which result in excitatory postsynaptic potentials, starting action potentials at the trigger zone of my neurons, through primary and secondary neurons to my central nervous system to give me the sensation of warmth. I like it.

In another year or so I'm gonna read this again and laugh my ass off
9/23/2015 c5 2madamemercurial
Oh, my god, I'm so glad you just pull stuff out at random from texts... I've been sitting here laughing and going cross eyed trying to figure out all the math references... naturally, since i did biology in school, i had to google the hell out of everything.

Omygod i love this story...

thank you so very, very much for writing it... (I never even checked how long ago you finished this, so it might be very, very late, and in that case, apologies)

9/15/2015 c3 5stupidsilence
well this is indeed interesting
I guess even a violent guy is still a guy, and Rafe's too chickenshit to tell the girl he doesn't like her even though he fights guys and sells drugs. Ahhaha..cute
$20 for pot tho? is that the going rate? huh...
can't keep up with all the weird sayings, even with all my AP classes I have to slow down and think about what she's saying and it makes for slower, a bit more difficult reading, but it's entertaining nonetheless, cute honestly
9/15/2015 c1 stupidsilence
it seems like an interesting enough basis for the story and I'm very interested in reading more.
I have to say I'm not too fond of your protagonist. She's got a holier-than-thou attitude that really pisses me off; just because you're "different" doesn't make you better than anyone else. But that's me.
Should an interesting read~
Gotta say, I love your writing style~~
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