Reviews: The Bus Stop | FictionPress

11/23/2005 c1

16gopie
Thanks for reviewing 'Betrayal'!This was so cool, and funny. Great work.

9/30/2005 c1

4one who hides in dreams
maybe it is better in story format... :|

9/19/2005 c1

13KwazyKandyPie
hmm, interesting. very unique. awesome poem!-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-

9/9/2005 c1

73Rozlin
awesome! i wouldn't want a round trip though... :( sad thought

9/9/2005 c1

612simpleplan13
I think it would make a better short story.. it's a funny idea

9/7/2005 c1

26Cadience Gemma Topaz
Kind of confusing, but still very interesting.

9/3/2005 c1

132mizu no kokoro
wow, powerful emotions in this~~ i like the slight imagery~ good work

keep writing!

9/3/2005 c1

103Unready
I think this would be better in a one-shot as well. nice as it is, though