for A Gift From A Stranger3/27/2006 c1 
4skylines
Aww it really isn't bad! You should write more peoms, you honestly do seem to have a talent with them. I found a lot of meaning in it, I use to use a style similar to this in my writing.
4skylinesAww it really isn't bad! You should write more peoms, you honestly do seem to have a talent with them. I found a lot of meaning in it, I use to use a style similar to this in my writing.
3/18/2006 c1 2Overwhelming Screams
Hey plinky...how were you wen you wrote this? it's reli good, chapter 3 of the fallen angel will be up in a while, as a gr. 7 i'm gettin quite a lot of hwk so bare with me. bye,
Sarah
2Overwhelming ScreamsHey plinky...how were you wen you wrote this? it's reli good, chapter 3 of the fallen angel will be up in a while, as a gr. 7 i'm gettin quite a lot of hwk so bare with me. bye,
Sarah
3/4/2006 c1 Broken Melody
'as I walk in the summer sunshine'
I think that line is so very peaceful and very nice. It almost sounds like a rhyme. I think it sounds very nice because at that moment I think of the moment I first went onto a boat and saw the sunshine on the sea. It was a gift to me; like the smallest smile from a stranger.
I do not feel I agree that a smile from someone I do not know would be apealing. He or she could be staring at me chest, smiling at only that; leaving me to frown.
I think this was nice.
'as I walk in the summer sunshine'
I think that line is so very peaceful and very nice. It almost sounds like a rhyme. I think it sounds very nice because at that moment I think of the moment I first went onto a boat and saw the sunshine on the sea. It was a gift to me; like the smallest smile from a stranger.
I do not feel I agree that a smile from someone I do not know would be apealing. He or she could be staring at me chest, smiling at only that; leaving me to frown.
I think this was nice.
2/3/2006 c1 19Pink Sparrow
oh WOW. I love the way its written. Its so true! I love the way its written. It's really good.
19Pink Sparrowoh WOW. I love the way its written. Its so true! I love the way its written. It's really good.
1/10/2006 c1 hoowdoideletethisaccount
That is adorable! Isn't that the truth? It means SO much when someone smiles at you, really smiles, looking right into your eyes smiling ONLY for you, only for that moment in time... It can be anybody, but it makes you feel so good. Makes you feel like you're not alone.
Very, very sweet poem!
That is adorable! Isn't that the truth? It means SO much when someone smiles at you, really smiles, looking right into your eyes smiling ONLY for you, only for that moment in time... It can be anybody, but it makes you feel so good. Makes you feel like you're not alone.
Very, very sweet poem!
1/2/2006 c1 10Winter Eve
coincidentally (or not) this happened to me about a week ago and still I can't forget about it.
I love it.
Will be adding to my favorites. ^_^
10Winter Evecoincidentally (or not) this happened to me about a week ago and still I can't forget about it.
I love it.
Will be adding to my favorites. ^_^
12/17/2005 c1 10Finger Dingbat
lol, made me smile as well, love the wording, and that you dont really connect why she (or you...?) would be giving back a present till u figure out what it is. then it makes perfect sense.sersioly great job... and thanks for the many reviews...
10Finger Dingbatlol, made me smile as well, love the wording, and that you dont really connect why she (or you...?) would be giving back a present till u figure out what it is. then it makes perfect sense.sersioly great job... and thanks for the many reviews...
11/30/2005 c1 6Scratching of my quill 1835
Hi! Thanks for reviewing mine. you sure are a prolific writer! The concept of "a smile from a stranger" is quite cliched, but you made your language and the way you present this makes it stand out!
Write on! (that was redundant, looking at the no. of stories you've authored...) anyway, TIS GOOD
6Scratching of my quill 1835Hi! Thanks for reviewing mine. you sure are a prolific writer! The concept of "a smile from a stranger" is quite cliched, but you made your language and the way you present this makes it stand out!
Write on! (that was redundant, looking at the no. of stories you've authored...) anyway, TIS GOOD
11/28/2005 c1 SaimiChan
ahihi...u sure LOVE poetry. no wonder u always mention "poetry" in ur comments to me. well, to be honest...i ain't too good at poetry. but i've been writting stories since i was in grade school! specifically, Grade4. I started with fics, then made my own stories...then came gravitation...then my ideas just went...BOOM! i HAD to write about yuki eiri...i just HAD TO! hehehe. ^^
ahihi...u sure LOVE poetry. no wonder u always mention "poetry" in ur comments to me. well, to be honest...i ain't too good at poetry. but i've been writting stories since i was in grade school! specifically, Grade4. I started with fics, then made my own stories...then came gravitation...then my ideas just went...BOOM! i HAD to write about yuki eiri...i just HAD TO! hehehe. ^^
11/27/2005 c1 5Mad Asher
This is good. This is good, yeah...
I liked it, yeah, a smile can brighten a person's day. Nicely said.
X-Eragon-X
5Mad AsherThis is good. This is good, yeah...
I liked it, yeah, a smile can brighten a person's day. Nicely said.
X-Eragon-X
11/17/2005 c1 46Former Kimmi Gray
OH, I do love this one very much! Heh its so awesomely charming and made me smile as well! Bravo.
Thank you very much for reviewing Akaisha, I hope that it works out alright, so please check back!.
Some say black, some say white I say GRAY so I'm always right.
46Former Kimmi GrayOH, I do love this one very much! Heh its so awesomely charming and made me smile as well! Bravo.
Thank you very much for reviewing Akaisha, I hope that it works out alright, so please check back!.
Some say black, some say white I say GRAY so I'm always right.