for At a Little After Nine1/23/2006 c1 
2SSSSS
Great job with this. Not many people mention the Pentagon, or even the field in PA when they talk about 9/11; one reason why I liked this a lot. There are just so many bad things that happen in our world-terrible. Anyways, good poem!
Tschau,Sam
P.S. Thanks for the reviews!
2SSSSSGreat job with this. Not many people mention the Pentagon, or even the field in PA when they talk about 9/11; one reason why I liked this a lot. There are just so many bad things that happen in our world-terrible. Anyways, good poem!
Tschau,Sam
P.S. Thanks for the reviews!
12/20/2005 c1 1Music Makes Me Lose Control
Interesting, it makes me feel like I was there. kinda spooky eh?
ur writing buddy :)
1Music Makes Me Lose ControlInteresting, it makes me feel like I was there. kinda spooky eh?
ur writing buddy :)
11/11/2005 c1 nor
MAN that's good. i love how you use words to cause more impact than they would, otherwise. very good stuff.
MAN that's good. i love how you use words to cause more impact than they would, otherwise. very good stuff.
10/27/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
it truly was a tragic event in human history~ although, there have been much worse, and tragedy continues to swarm in our world... we never did learn from mistakes...
keep writing!
132mizu no kokoroit truly was a tragic event in human history~ although, there have been much worse, and tragedy continues to swarm in our world... we never did learn from mistakes...
keep writing!
10/19/2005 c1 Charity F
very cool girl, very cool...
yet again, you have managed to capture the sentiment and message with this topic and i like how you like to explore different topics and situations...it makes reading your stuff all the more interesting and enjoyable because not two things are the same...
i love it, and want to see more of it!
~Tabitha The Great XD
very cool girl, very cool...
yet again, you have managed to capture the sentiment and message with this topic and i like how you like to explore different topics and situations...it makes reading your stuff all the more interesting and enjoyable because not two things are the same...
i love it, and want to see more of it!
~Tabitha The Great XD
10/8/2005 c1 42Emmytastic gal
WOW. Thats amazing. So very powerful. You did a GREAT job. Keep it up.
write on,-Em
42Emmytastic galWOW. Thats amazing. So very powerful. You did a GREAT job. Keep it up.
write on,-Em
10/6/2005 c1 10Sudden-Silence
Another great one. This one is really moving. Brings back that day like ti was yesterday.
10Sudden-SilenceAnother great one. This one is really moving. Brings back that day like ti was yesterday.
10/2/2005 c1 58White Tea and Ginger
Thanks very much for the nice review you left me.
Wow, what a beautifully written piece. The title is perfect and really caught my attention. I especially love the description about the people tucking into work..lovely. Great piece. Keep up the beautiful work.
58White Tea and GingerThanks very much for the nice review you left me.
Wow, what a beautifully written piece. The title is perfect and really caught my attention. I especially love the description about the people tucking into work..lovely. Great piece. Keep up the beautiful work.
9/28/2005 c1 15Amaryllis-lily
I saw the documentary on Flight 93 this 9/11. It affected me profoundly. These people had no idea what was going to happen to them, and they still displayed such courage. I love your poem, mostly 'cause I can really relate to it. It also flows very nicely.
Thanks for the review. :)
15Amaryllis-lilyI saw the documentary on Flight 93 this 9/11. It affected me profoundly. These people had no idea what was going to happen to them, and they still displayed such courage. I love your poem, mostly 'cause I can really relate to it. It also flows very nicely.
Thanks for the review. :)
9/27/2005 c1 Needa S
Very nice, great flow. Excellent write. Thank ya for your reviews. Btw.. writing about other religions, I must write what I believe in. I enjoy reading about other religions tho. I releaize there are lot's of others out there and I respect their beliefs as well. Keep on writing for ya are very talented.
Needa S.
Very nice, great flow. Excellent write. Thank ya for your reviews. Btw.. writing about other religions, I must write what I believe in. I enjoy reading about other religions tho. I releaize there are lot's of others out there and I respect their beliefs as well. Keep on writing for ya are very talented.
Needa S.
9/19/2005 c1 70Maisha Mafuriko
Excellent writing that gives to us the remembrance that we never know when that "at a little after nine" time we will be confronted with, so Yes! "Let's Roll"
70Maisha MafurikoExcellent writing that gives to us the remembrance that we never know when that "at a little after nine" time we will be confronted with, so Yes! "Let's Roll"
9/14/2005 c1 22nyvashorte
I like this one. The 9/11 attack injured me personally, since my whole family was there, but no one got hurt. KEEP WRITING!
22nyvashorteI like this one. The 9/11 attack injured me personally, since my whole family was there, but no one got hurt. KEEP WRITING!