9/18/2005 c1 9Rosemarykiss
Wow, this is deep and really well thought out. This is truly one of your most thoughtful writings:)

9/5/2005 c1 24Roselillie
Wow...ok first of all Awesome poem!...

Secondly...The way your are to kill yourself, can't you find something that leaves less of a mess, and less of a constant memory for others...ok so I know I shouldn't be challenging you on this but hey...I'm just that kind of person...especially since you wnat to disappear...because then your leaving a constant reminder for them to remember you by...Third of all...you can't completely disappear...because people are going to see you and unless you become invisible you will always make an impression to all those who see you and speak to you...

I'm sorry if this review bothers you, but I have thought up many of these types of plans, and knowing that someone else is doing the same thing makes me want to help them better the plans, BUT ONLY with the promise that none of this will actually be carried out.

Again, great poem! I love the flow of it and the vividness of it. I can see all these images and feel all the emotions. Just one more question...Why are you running away from you...because that's what I see at the end of the poem.

Awesome poem! Keep it up!