for Worthy12/29/2005 c1 
28Vivica Midnight
I'm not too keen on the way you ended the poem, but otherwise, you did a great job on it.10/10
28Vivica MidnightI'm not too keen on the way you ended the poem, but otherwise, you did a great job on it.10/10
11/19/2005 c1 Silence the Storm
'On a list of tasks as long as Hercules'...'Lucky losses in the sand'...Those were superb lines. An excellent poem, do write on.
'On a list of tasks as long as Hercules'...'Lucky losses in the sand'...Those were superb lines. An excellent poem, do write on.
9/10/2005 c1 56Blue SunriZe
I like when you first put: "Jack's in his box/The mad hatter’s gone for tea." I like that line. I hated going back to school too esp. high school. Hopefully now it will be better since I am in college.
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56Blue SunriZeI like when you first put: "Jack's in his box/The mad hatter’s gone for tea." I like that line. I hated going back to school too esp. high school. Hopefully now it will be better since I am in college.
Thank you for reviewing my story!
9/8/2005 c1 Queen of Dawn
I thought that was interesting, though i'm not sure if you did this statement - 'I'm i worthy' on purpose or made an error...is it meant to be 'am i worthy?' or 'i'm i worthy' which kinda doesn't make sense completely...
well good work :)
I thought that was interesting, though i'm not sure if you did this statement - 'I'm i worthy' on purpose or made an error...is it meant to be 'am i worthy?' or 'i'm i worthy' which kinda doesn't make sense completely...
well good work :)