for x3/29/2006 c1 the naked civil servant
god, amazing. so desperate & lonely. the formatting really breaks it up - gorgeous. AH sensory overload :P
god, amazing. so desperate & lonely. the formatting really breaks it up - gorgeous. AH sensory overload :P
9/10/2005 c1 myno
i adore this. the image of bottling missed opportunities is so lovely... i relate, which is a lame thing to say in a review, but it's true.
i adore this. the image of bottling missed opportunities is so lovely... i relate, which is a lame thing to say in a review, but it's true.
9/8/2005 c1 Martin Peterson
Once again amazingly clever. The third line seems a bit strange, if only because you haven't split the words according to the syllables, though I'm sure there's a good reason for that; every other part of your poems are closely calculated.
Matt
Once again amazingly clever. The third line seems a bit strange, if only because you haven't split the words according to the syllables, though I'm sure there's a good reason for that; every other part of your poems are closely calculated.
Matt
9/6/2005 c1 
1k+Faithless Juliet
can I catch every missed opportunity, bottle it and p o u r them out to you now?-Love that line.
Juliet.
1k+Faithless Julietcan I catch every missed opportunity, bottle it and p o u r them out to you now?-Love that line.
Juliet.