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9/27/2005 c1 32The Blind Guardian
I've actually encountered this vary kind of thing, so I found I could relate to this poem quite a bit. It's true that others can make the outcome very bleak.Remy/The Blind Guardian
9/13/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
very sweet sotry.. sad poem.. very cool & unique I like it a lot
9/7/2005 c1 145transparency93
truly amazing. :) loved it. keep writing.
9/7/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
Makes me think of people who want help and pity and such, then get mad because you never helped when they never told you in the first place... gotta leave some clues out in the open, right? anyway, very nice job.
9/6/2005 c1 24Searching4Truth
Wow, that was so good. The flow and rhyming were great. I can relate to this...it's weird how you can try so hard to be noticed and no one does...Anyway, great job. Keep writing, you're really good! :-)

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