for The Bestest Cure10/18/2008 c1 
2dragonflydreamer
Wow. Just . . . wow.
The contrast you created in this was amazing. At first it seemed like it was going to be completely humorous, and then in one line you completely turned it around.
And on a similar note, I like how you blended the comedy and tragedy. It gave it a lot of meaning, but still kept it light.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
2dragonflydreamerWow. Just . . . wow.
The contrast you created in this was amazing. At first it seemed like it was going to be completely humorous, and then in one line you completely turned it around.
And on a similar note, I like how you blended the comedy and tragedy. It gave it a lot of meaning, but still kept it light.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
11/3/2006 c1 43NinjaStoryteller
Haha... eerie indeed.
And indeed again, he will not cry anymore.
Perfect title.
43NinjaStorytellerHaha... eerie indeed.
And indeed again, he will not cry anymore.
Perfect title.
10/3/2006 c1 4K. T. Marie
o, that's just... 'laughs-in-that-nervous-sort-of-way-and-then-creeps-away-very-carefully'
4K. T. Marieo, that's just... 'laughs-in-that-nervous-sort-of-way-and-then-creeps-away-very-carefully'
4/1/2006 c1 Wopaloplopyop
At first when I read it, I laughed out loud. Then I thought, wait, that's kinda creepy... it a sick, twisted, sort of way...
At first when I read it, I laughed out loud. Then I thought, wait, that's kinda creepy... it a sick, twisted, sort of way...
3/26/2006 c1 3beinedhiel
oh freaky... and of course it's up to our own twisted minds to decide what really happened... awesome!
3beinedhieloh freaky... and of course it's up to our own twisted minds to decide what really happened... awesome!
3/19/2006 c1 6McQuinn
Ooh. A little "Twilight Zone"-ish. This is very interesting - it looks to me like the words are spoken by a child, because, first of all, the title is "The Bestest Cure," and the speaker regards the mother as "mom." I like this. The (lack) of capitolization of "Cure" in the title kind of bothers me, though, but that's me being neurotic.
-McQuinn
6McQuinnOoh. A little "Twilight Zone"-ish. This is very interesting - it looks to me like the words are spoken by a child, because, first of all, the title is "The Bestest Cure," and the speaker regards the mother as "mom." I like this. The (lack) of capitolization of "Cure" in the title kind of bothers me, though, but that's me being neurotic.
-McQuinn
2/24/2006 c1 460Time To Change
how you leave the rest to the imagination is pretty creepy. I like the format, and the way you say so much in such a concise, quick way.
Kewl piece.
460Time To Changehow you leave the rest to the imagination is pretty creepy. I like the format, and the way you say so much in such a concise, quick way.
Kewl piece.
1/28/2006 c1 6Count of Casualty
*jaw drop* Whoa... :O Just whoa... I think I have an idea of what happened... and it's creepy... *hides in corner*
Very interesting poem... very interesting...
6Count of Casualty*jaw drop* Whoa... :O Just whoa... I think I have an idea of what happened... and it's creepy... *hides in corner*
Very interesting poem... very interesting...
1/25/2006 c1 11les petits bateaux
Very intriguing and a little creepy too. I like the way you created a whole plot of a story with just three lines. Good job.
11les petits bateauxVery intriguing and a little creepy too. I like the way you created a whole plot of a story with just three lines. Good job.
1/18/2006 c1 79Spare Change
Bravo! This is more strange than scary, in my opinion, but this sort of strange takes a lot of skill to pull off. :) Great job. Still trying to figure out whether the baby is dead or not. Haha.
79Spare ChangeBravo! This is more strange than scary, in my opinion, but this sort of strange takes a lot of skill to pull off. :) Great job. Still trying to figure out whether the baby is dead or not. Haha.