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9/7/2005 c1 24Fireeye Howlsong Rainpelt
Pretty good. A bit short, but good. The flow of the words is a bit off, but a little polish'll make it better. In a few of the places you might simply be able to switch the lines and it'll be better.

But I like it.

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