Reviews: Wish | FictionPress

10/14/2005 c1

4Saika
Hehehe hiya Mini Sweety! I got here from your fanficiton.net account. Awesome story! This could fit well in a CCS catagory. Update! ^-'

10/6/2005 c1

2Evan-Cora
Nice, very nice, update soon.

9/20/2005 c1 Walking Green Cucumber
Hi! I noticed you had a lot more manga up... and I really enjoyed this story. I saw a totally new aspect of your writing (scream)! It's so cool! And this story is so interesting... wow... you write everywhere! And I hope you update soon!

9/7/2005 c1

2Nirat
Very interesting. I like how it's starting out. It's hard to distinguish between what is being said and what thoughts Lori can hear, though. Maybe you could use "" for words and '' for thoughts. Btu overall, it's highly original! Keep it up! ~ Omi-sempai